All Comments on 'Lord of the Rings: Legolas'

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Joseki KoJoseki Koalmost 20 years ago
Sweet

LOL Loved the story Art, I thought that was a very intersting take on party animal like Legolas.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Lord.......

...is that a ring or what, I gotta get me one of those. Wow this story was written with an old style of writeing, are you an english professor? Love the way it flowed and the take on a movie that I love was very well done. BROVO, only a couple grammer situations that I would have altered. But I await another tale in this chain. (D)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Lacking...

While this story was a fantastic attempt, I felt it lacking something. As another reader commented, an older writing style was attempted... however unsuccessfully. There was no consistency to the sentence structure and the encounter wasn't developed. I feel the initial idea was sound; however, the execution was less than attractive.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Ualmost 18 years ago
good

just saw this one today...

really liked it!

~LB~

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