All Comments on 'Real Love Pt. 04'

Cut back on the use of Baby and Babe. Those endearments were constantly used by all the characters.

What injuries did Taylor receive from the shooting? She got released from the hospital pretty quick.

Quit writing til you get an editor or learn to proof read yourself, how can you not see the errors? Its painful to read and not once have you improved since chapter 1, its gone down hill each chapter and I send the last comment, stop using babe/babes for EVERYTHING.