All Comments on 'Losing Han Ch. 01'

Who want want a middle aged addict? And what will the drugs do to the unborn child?

Sorry but this story was pretty bad.

Good story.

Well written and hot. Ignore whack doodles comment.

Yeah, you could include risk of drug on fetus, but that'd be for a multi-chapter story and definitely a downer.

Keep up the writing, you're doing great

Good story line. I can't wrap my head around Dave's motivation for his crazy anger obviously directed at Jack.

Next chapter should include how Dave tires of Han and dumps her and the child. Its clear he is a selfish dick who's only in it for his own pleasure and to hurt Jack. Han & the baby are only a means to those ends.

Han should go through a number of lovers as she withdraws from the drug, but in the end she should end up with Jack.

...and final chapter.

In it, Jack goes dark, tracks down Dave and Han. He traps Dave in an elevator and beats him to within an inch of his life, extracts the location of Dave's supply and takes it after hog-tying Dave and Han to a post in the building's basement.

He takes the Y45-beta and grows his already larger cock to a massive 12" long and big around as a Foster's Lager. Then he takes two doses of Y29, spread over three days. At the end of the week, his frequent visits to the basement of the abandoned building has taught him several things. Han is super horny all the time. She doesn't care what cock is fucking her or where, just so she's getting fucked. Dave's balls are so swollen, they've turned black and his cock oozes sperm continuously. He's also in an unbearable amount of pain, with massive sperm production and no outlet for a week. He had been fine, as long as he could fuck Han 16 or 17 times a day. She was a pug glue of cum and shrieked at Jack every time he came to replenish their water and food, to fuck her. She pled with him, begged and pleaded so constantly, he grew tired of her noise. Although she was pregnant with Dave's baby, Jack needed a regular outlet now and so he fucked Han silly four or five times at every visit. At nearly nine months pregnant, it was getting difficult for her to manage his monster cock. Jack finished her off pretty hard that next Thursday but he needed to come at least one more time. So, he used some of the copious liquids leaking out of Han's pussy to lube up Dave's asshole, added some of Dave's drizzle and rammed home in his ass in one hard, fast thrust. When he finished, Dave was crying, "Thank you, oh, thank you! I needed to come so badly, but you tore my insides and I'm hurt and bleeding."

Jack smiled and said, "You'll get over it...eventually." Dave pleaded for medical help that was never going to come. That Saturday, Jack came with some clothes he'd bought for Han's new shape. She was his again, but couldn't quote keep up.

He took her home, fucked her till she fainted, tied her to the bed with enough slack to get to the bathroom, then headed out to a local pick-up bar. Within an hour, he had two lovely ladies with jammin' athletic bods, the blonde with big, fake tits, the redhead only slightly smaller, but not enhanced and with the tightest ass he's ever seen. His careful dosing of their drinks with small amounts of X31, ensured he would get them home to have a great time.

Over the next few days, he got them 'up to speed' with Han, moved them in to his place and went to work. Within the month, both tested positive for a pregnancy and Jack got off 20 or more times a day. He worked off the paunch that had started to develop and now looked like an Adonis. He got an outside sales job for a local manufacturer, so was able to spend at least part of every day, fucking a 'new find' from the offices of his customers, or at a lunch counter or on the commuter trains. He did very well and soon had two more lovely ladies at his constant disposal and hungry for his cock, his sperm and the massive orgasms he gave them every time they fucked.

An interesting and unanticipated effect of the drugs he'd used, was that upon becoming pregnant, his women's libidos would nearly double. But after giving birth, they would return to near their original normal, until in the company of Jack. Suddenly, like a match had lit them like a bonfire, they would burn to fuck him.

They were able to go back to work and took turns fucking Jack all he wanted.

He wanted them all constantly, so spent nearly his whole time off work fucking his five mates. Han kept her baby, but had cleaned out Dave's accounts when it was clear he wouldn't be needing anything anymore.

They bought five acres just out of town, built a house with ten bedrooms and twelve bathrooms, an Olympic-sized swimming pool, complete workout facility and a modest movie theater. Han had come to accept that she must share Jack with her four housemates, but Jack never disappointed and they all got along fine. If someone got a little 'anxious', several of the others would help her relax a bit. It wasn't the same or as good as Jack gave them, but it helped keep everybody happy.

Jack had quit looking for more women, five was almost perfect, but he still ran across willing and beautiful women in his day to day work travels and never disappointed them, if he wanted to fuck them.

Eventually, the drugs ran out, but several made permanent changes to the users.

With all the sex, boobs were naturally a little bigger and after lactating and nursing babies, most never stopped lactating on demand and had wonderful chests to delight and enjoy.

The X31 had an interesting effect on male users....they developed large breasts, lost all their body hair below their scalp. Some experienced some growth in their cocks, but became impotent, others transgenerated into full-fledged women, with vaginas, but no ovaries, their testicles shrinking to the size of peas, their penises and scrotums pulling back into their bodies as vaginas developed over about a year.

The blonde tough that had threatened Jack, got a good dose of desperzerol when he accosted him at a mall. This rendered him very suggestible and docile until Jack got him him, tied him down and administered a 5-drop dose of x31 and x27. It seems that when given after x31, x27 had an even more pronounced and permanent effect on the user. In his case, Mathhew (that was his name) became so effeminate that one year after his last assault, he was as girly as a teenager, with a ravenous appetite for pussy cock and sperm.

Jack got him and apartment in Williams and set him/her up as a high-class escort.

Within seven months she had two room mates, one also a 'converted' woman, the other a girl that just needed as many cocks in a day as she could manage.

Soon, the income from this little enterprise produced a substantial fortune for the group.

And so, Dave died from anal bleeding and an extreme case of blue balls, Han became one of 5 permanent, full time housemates, but had no special prominence there. She was never able to give Jack a baby, but all the other girls gave him several each.

All were extremely healthy with no other side effects ever discovered.

So yeah. Jack gets his hands on a moderately sizeable supply of the drugs. After the 'happy incident with Matthew, he begins to experiment with sequencing different combinations and orders, eventually discovering some unbelievable outcomes.....but that is for another fantasy...another chapter.

I liked your idea fine. Didn't care much for the presentation, with all its technical issues and somewhat wandering presentation style. And I felt you could put a lot more effort into your characters and their actions. Some of this was interestingly spot on the human behaviors. Some was astonishingly inauthentic and well beyond credible.

But not bad in the balance.

Thanks.

I absolutely loved this story. Han's dedication to her new master is mesmerizing. I am your PLAYGROUND-awesome!

Enjoyed the sex and the loss of control stuff BUT should've made her and Jack be interested in starting a family, not already having 2 kids, now she's a horrible mother/person on top of it. Speaking of mothering, I wouldn't have brought a pregnancy into it at all, i know youre painting the 'will do anything' picture but with this type of "addiction" what kind of a mom will she be, baby screaming in the other room but mommas got get her cum fix or she'll get the shakes. Sorry, left baby in the car on a hot day - had to blow daddy for a half hour so I wouldn't go into shock. Better for Dave to fuck her senseless and leave her marriage in ruin. I'm splitting hairs - overall good story!

Thanks to all for your feedback and suggestions. I submitted an update to it which changes the following:

-Han and Jack have no kids (barely mentioned, no where good to go with that plot thread, and didn't really add to anyone's character)

-Expanded Dave and Han's background

-Left Jack in more of a cliffhanger

-Minor detail changes and typo fixes

Also, not revealing if Han gets knocked up (by Dave or someone else). That will be saved for later or may even change.

So I want to continue this story and like a lot of the ideas provided in the comments and email. I'll be looking for an editor for further chapters and always open to critical feedback. This has been fun sharing.

Did Jack end up jumping off the bridge at the end??? Will there be another chapter to this??? Great story maybe a series should be done or spin offs with characters from Dave's company doing their things with these drugs!!!

He wrote a similar story called fourteen day program. Yours reminds me a little of that story. Don't get me wrong, your story is different in many ways. I'm wondering where you are going with it.

These drugs, as I understand it, are not fully refined. I think at least one was said to be experimental. So shouldn't there be unknown side effects and/or instability to some degree? Dave can't have performed/calculated any or all drug interactions. So doesn't that leave the possibility for Jack getting advice from someone, a pharmacist or somebody, that can lead him to some action to try to get Han back? Just a thought.

DB71

Just read 'Fourteen Day Program'. Wow. Super creepy. I liked it.

Good plot point suggestion. I actually have something like that further down but it may change drastically.

If you wanted to make this more sick and twisted, you could have Han already have a child and Dave has her abandon it like totally just give up being a mom. And maybe Dave convinced her that kids were a strain on her, that they cause stress, and tie her down. And since she's young Dave would add that why have kids at your age when you can be out free and fucking and having a lot of promiscuous, dirty, naughty sex.

Yeah, I had an early version like that. A hot mom forsaking her family for sexual deviancy, woo! But it slowed and complicated where I wanted to go with the story. This is just for fun, so give me a break.

i liked the first version better

The main difference in that one (aside from typos and their kids) is that it ends right after the threat from the ex-military guy, and then Jack receives a picture of a very pregnant Han giving a blowjob.

Sure, after this one, I'll re-post that one with an alternate continuation. Probably be a lot shorter and get real weird with it though.

the wife and mother aspect is aturn on

Great stuff. Exactly the kind of story i tried writing but could never quite finish. Also this is the first time I've ever commented..keep up the good work

Can you repost the original