Not bad but would love to hear more of your mother and sister. Why would you need to keep them 'under control'? Earlier I read of you and your sister with a brief encounter. Maybe that explains her. Though I would to hear more of encounters with her you hinted at. But why your mother? I know you found old photos of her but that was decades ago. Are there liasions with her as well? You do a good job expressing yourself and we would to hear more about you, Sarah and your mother. Keep up the good work.
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Not bad
Not bad but would love to hear more of your mother and sister. Why would you need to keep them 'under control'? Earlier I read of you and your sister with a brief encounter. Maybe that explains her. Though I would to hear more of encounters with her you hinted at. But why your mother? I know you found old photos of her but that was decades ago. Are there liasions with her as well? You do a good job expressing yourself and we would to hear more about you, Sarah and your mother. Keep up the good work.
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