by bulld
I simply love this story. It is possibly the best I have ever read in this catagory. Master is the Master we are all looking for.
These two get kudos for erotica. it is more than just erotic literature it is also a good guide of how D/s should be
this is by far the best storie I have ever read concerning submission. I would love you to finish writing this, to make it a complete novel.
I wish that you would continue with this story. I love the way that you started it off and although it is a great story, its got so much more potential if you keep going. I look forward to reading more by you!