All Comments on 'My Soul'

I hope things pick up now that you have thrown that poor

soul out. I wish we could 'resoul' like shoes. This poem

is kinda heavy for rhyme but I still get the point.

This poem is on the dark side,

and I think your talents lie more with the light.

I hope you are on the uphill slope and continue to write.

The meter falters in this work and the words are well used.

This can happen when a poet is "down" enough not to really care.

"in to" is more commonly "into"