VERY HOT, MAKES ME HORNY
I really liked the story. I wish you would explain a little more about who "Ian" is and where Retrained in Basic is located. I could not find it!
This is one of the reason why I love Literotica! I asked for help and got it. Thanks guys! Hope everyone loves the stories as much as I do.
Hi. Loved the story but just felt you rushed the sex part. It was quite a loving session and right for the story but could have been extended just a little bit more to give a fuller story ending.
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