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NOT INCEST
Not a story... poorly written jumbled mess. Seems like either "English as a fifth language" or an eighth grader that hacked his father's computer. Negative 10 stars.
Rape story
this had nothing to do with incest, was a rape story, you posted in wrong category. I didn't care for your story either, it is trash.
That's not even Judo either
In Judo the goal is to flip your opponent there's no punching.
Just hand to hand trying to throw your opponent.
Really!!!
Biggest load of crap I have had the misfortune to read in a long time.
Hope you have a day job because writing sure ain't going to get you far.
OMFG
What crap you have written here, it's actually so freakin' bad it's going to be a classic, as in 'this how how to write a real, outstanding piece of mindless horseshit' classic. Congratulations, there have been some stinkers here before but this plumbs new depths, and leave a whole new magnitude of bad stench behind; at last, you're famous, enjoy it.
Why is this here?
Better question. Why is this anywhere?
consider this a request for a translation
of the translation
I have no idea what this is or what it means
Wow
There was a grammatical error in nearly every sentence. Incredible. I would say this story was posted in the wrong category, but the truth is, the real tragedy was that it got posted at all.
I agree that this tale must go down as the worst ever.
Not PWP
This is a new category. Not rescue complex, or PWP, but Violence/Snuff without Plot.
Please add 'snuff' to tags, and get an editor or delete this poorly written effort.
ZERO!
Lit, please add a zero rating for garbage like this.
Seemed like something author typed on a bad day.
Who did this to you?!
Jokes on me, I read it from start to finish wanting to see where it went.
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