by JukeboxEMCSA
I love it. You are one talented writer (I wish I had your skill) and I So agree, it could definitely use an audio accompaniment. Just Love it.
Definitely want to hear this, in addition to reading, this would be a great script, an I bet you have many more in you.
That was just... Oh my god... I am.... Can I be your dolly ......please....
I wish all of your submissions had audio attached. I don't have enough hands without it :/
The choice of narrative was striking. Nice, slow build up. Quick release at end. No typos..pet peeve of mine, sentence structure impeccable. Fast enjoyable read. Hope I can find more by this author. Keep up the inspired work!!!
This story is simply amazing. In fact, this not a "story" … it is a transformative experience. I have not felt this much comfort and personal intimacy in a long time. I feel like I can breathe freely.
I needed this.
Thank you so much.