All Comments on 'Doll'

Wow. That was just... Quite a feat there

This is really great, could use an audio counterpart.

I love it. You are one talented writer (I wish I had your skill) and I So agree, it could definitely use an audio accompaniment. Just Love it.

Definitely want to hear this, in addition to reading, this would be a great script, an I bet you have many more in you.

That was just... Oh my god... I am.... Can I be your dolly ......please....

not sure what happened

I wish all of your submissions had audio attached. I don't have enough hands without it :/

I would literally pay to listen to this in audio form, oh god

It feels so wrong. Yet... I'm calm. I came when he said. It said.....

The choice of narrative was striking. Nice, slow build up. Quick release at end. No typos..pet peeve of mine, sentence structure impeccable. Fast enjoyable read. Hope I can find more by this author. Keep up the inspired work!!!

This story is simply amazing. In fact, this not a "story" … it is a transformative experience. I have not felt this much comfort and personal intimacy in a long time. I feel like I can breathe freely.

I needed this.

Thank you so much.