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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
beulahthebrit

I hope for Phyllis's sake it's not just the once, she must know now that nothing feels as good as two cocks filling your pussy at once, then both of them filling you full of cum. Once tried never forgotten, more please.

Sidney43Sidney43over 7 years ago

Yes, I suspect she would be interested in another "just once", maybe with Eric before he leaves for good. Depends on whether the author wants to continue the story, or let it stay as is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story

And very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
For Chapter 3-Eric Now Pays it Forward

Here's my idea for a chapter 3. Since Phyllis paid it forward by helping Eric recover his mojo, she now introduces him to her 77 year old neighbor, Jane. Jane has been a widow for 12 years and fears that at her age, she'll never enjoy a healthy round of sex again. Eric pays it forward to Jane and shows her fears were unwarranted. Thoughts?

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 7 years ago
Once is never enough

I love a husband who is willing to share his wife. Xoxoxoxo Annette

romancerromancerover 7 years agoAuthor
Chapter 3?

I hadn't planned a Chapter 3 (I don't usually do a lot of chapters, and tend to lose interest in others' extended works), but the paying forward comment is getting me thinking, thanks, Anon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I've been there and

two men and a woman is usually better if just for the fact that she can keep going which in my experience gets her even hotter as it all goes on and on. It's also amazing how much a woman gets into it all once it starts even if she may seem shy normally. An old friend and I used to share women and we still talk about how it would turn a "normal" one into a wild insatiable and uninhibited fuck. Of course they talk to each other and that attracted more to us if just to see what that was like. A hot tub helped set things up .. that alcohol and a few joints and naked bodies, hmm sweet memories-

amoroneamoroneover 7 years ago
It's fiction

I love the second chapter and would love to read a sequel.

How about a much younger man this time.

A young guy from the gym or from work.

He could learn from them both.

techreadertechreaderover 7 years ago
Definitely Worth Continuing

I vote YES on a continuation of the story. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Shared

Make once only as more would spoil the beauty o he love story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A really good story.

Loved the double penetration at the end. A little more wine in a chapter 3 (hopefully), and another double penetration, but this time one in her pussy and one in her tight ass. That would be hot & a fitting ending to a very sexy tale. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
careful what one wishes for

The big question is where to go from here. How about this scenario?

Phyllis had enjoyed threesome far more than her wildest dreams and she craved a repeat with Eric and Don, but she was bothered by her promise of "just this once." Two weeks later, after dreaming about Eric 24/7, she couldn't help but broach the subject, which she did during sex with Don. Of couse he egged her on, and she ended up blurting out that she craved "doing that again." And that she didn't just want it, she craved it. Don replied, "Sorry Honey, but you're too late. Eric is now 8000 miles away. He left just two days ago, on Wednesday." Phyllis said, "Oh NO! Already!!" When Don admitted that he would have agreed with a repeat of their threesome, Phyllis became so emotional that she started crying, and her crying changed to cursing herself. That kind of emotional outburst was very out of character for his normally reserved wife. But over the next two months, Don learned the cause. Phyllis was having a somewhat early menopause, although she hadn't told him yet. The changes were pretty dramatic. She had already gained six pounds by the time of their tryst with Eric; she had quit going to the gym, and had become more and more depressed. But during the next three months, she gained 15 more pounds. When he finally confronted her about it, she was the most distressed and emotional he'd ever seen. A very heated "talk it out" ensued and she said she had never realized before the threesome how much she craved sex with multiple men and that now she knows that she wasted her best years, because now that she's "so old" no man other than Don would ever want her. He looked at her and said that's crazy! You don't look any different to me, other than a few pounds heavier. She said, "But what about this?!" and she took off her bra and showed him that her breasts had started to sag. "This!, they started doing this just a short while before our thing with Eric. They were looking so deflated to me, and I thought if I gained a little weight they might fiil out some and not sag so bad. But the more I gained, the heavier and droopier they got! And it made me even more delressed. And, well, Now, just look at me! Even if Eric moved back, he wouldn't even want me! Nobody would want me!" Don was very patient with her and after several conversations over several days, he had mostly convinced her that he actually preferred softer breasts that had some hang to them, but that what he liked the most about her before was how slender she had been for the first 20 years with him. Her depression made her think all was hopeless, but with Don's enciuragement, she made some big changes. Three weeks later she had lost 23 pounds, but of course that crash weight loss "did a number" on her breasts. Along with now firmly being in menopause, that sudden deflation caused them to drop almost two inches. Again Don was very encouraging. At his insistence, she started seeing a hypnotist, who worked on bringing back her confidence. The hypnotist was very non-conventional and when he learned of her former threesome and her 6 months of depression and recent almost total lack of sex drive, he used erotic imagery in their sessions. Her family doctor prescribed an anti-depressant. As it tirned out, she was one of the 0.2 percent of people who experience the side effect of hyper sexual exciteability. She didn't tell her doctor the full extent of her new sexual preoccupation, so he kept her on the meds, insisting that she needed it for her now long gone depression. Her hypnosis appointments continued long after she had gotten over her insecurities because they excited her so much. Whether from those sessions or from her meds or from Don's enciuragements, she made some huge changes in her life. She was now exercising 7 days per week and she almost entirely relaced her wardrobe after Don made a crass remark that she was never going to find a new Eric if she always dressed like an old woman. Don had been encouraging her and for several weeks had suggested that they find "another Eric." But neither of them knew of any good prospects. Finally, Don suggested an acquaintence named David, who was going through a divorce. Phyllis readily agreed and the had a similar threesome the next Saturday. Well. not exactly similar because David had a 3-inch penis. And when he lost his erection right after insertion he got mad and was rude to her and blaimed his impotence onher having "such saggy tits." Don was ready to punch him out except that David outweighed him by 40 pounds and was 20 years younger. After that failed tryst, Don was feeling desperate and both of them were frustrated. Phyllis sdmitted during an argument that she was no longer satisfied with "just one cock," They even quit having sex, although he caught her several times masturbating. Finally, in desperation, Don confided to his friend Jack about their problems. Jack then confided that Jack and his wife has neen swingers in the city they'd lived in before moving four years ago. Jack jumped at the opportunity and said he liked Phyllis a lot and that his wife Kathy had admitted that Don was cute. Don told Jack that Phyllis had always been very emphatic that she would never even consider swinging. Jack and Don ended up hatching a plan. They would try to duplicate the night with Eric, but with four people this time: plenty of alcohol, some dancing, then more erotic dancing. All was looking good for the men, until Kathy overheard Jack talking on the phone with Don. After Kathy spilled the beans with Phyllis the wives planned to "teach their husbands a lesson." Phyllis played dumb when Don told her that Jack had invited them over for dinner. She dressed while Don was in the shower and was ready to go out the door. Don got dressed in a hurry and they left and walked the two blocks to Jack and Kathy's house. When Jack offered to take Phyllis' light jacket, she took it off and revealed that she was wearing only a very sheer blouse and no bra. Kathy immediatel started complimenting Phyllis about her blouse and said she wished she (Kathy) has not dressed so dowdy. Kathy asked her husnand to "go find me a top more suitable and less PTA, while I get dinner ready. As Kathy was putting the last things on the table, Jack returned with a blouse for his wife. Kathy shrugged her shoulders and mumbled, "This is a joke, right?" But then she shook her head and walked out of the room. The blouse was actually a swimsuit cover up, with no buttons at all and even more sheer than Phyllis' blouse by far. To even halfway cover breasts, she had to tie the tails in a bow, but the cut of the cover ip was such that it could only be tied very mow on the waist because the top half was so wide open and widely spaced. It was obvious to everone that Kathy was just as saggy as Phyllis and the same size too. As the sat down to dinner, Phyllis said, "Now I feel like I'M The one dressed like a prude." Kathy said, "Well, I think you look hot as all grt out in that blouse, but if it doesn't seem bare enough, you could always lose some buttons. Don't worry about offending us. It's obvious that Jack gets his kicks by exposing me to everyone. Just look at this." (points to her where hrt nipples are showing through the lacy part of her top) "Maybe Don gets off on the same stuff. Strange stuff that goes through men's brains." Jack and Don noticeably squirmed in their seats, both from feeling "outed" and their swelling hardons. After several seconds of awkward silence, Kathy reasserted, "So go ahead, Phyllis, you certainly won't offend us." Phyllis said, "Well, I hate being dressed like a prude, even just like a relative prude," and she started unbuttoning her blouse. She stopped after four of her six buttons, which was enough to expse almost half of her breasts, given that the blouse was actually a size too small. Kathy immediately piped up, "Don't stop on my account. If you stop now I'll feel overdressed!" Phyllis said, "Well, wouldn't want youto feel uncomfortable in your own home!" As soon as she unbuttoned her last button, the stretchy sheer, part Spandex top pulled to the sides and exposed both her nipples. "Oops! Guess it won't stay put, should a bought the larger size. Now you probably feel overdressed." Phyllis laughed and Kathy said, "That's easily taken care of." and she quickly untied her coverup and jerked it wide and exposed all of both breasts. Phyllis then stood up amd said, "Oh, so this has become some sort of a game of chicken, huh? Well, don't expect ME to be the one that flinches!" Phyllis the took her blouse completely off and threw it as far away as she could. Kathy then took hers off as well, saying "Hmmpft, guess I'm not the only gal here with post-menopausal saggy tits." Phyllis pretended to be very angry from her trash talk, but they had carefully rehearsed it all in advance. Phyllis then said, "i suppose next I need to expose my post-menopausal pussy!" and she slipped off her skirt. She wasn't wearing any panties and Kathy said, "Hmm, not bad. Do you still have to shave that pussy or is that bald cunt natural now?" Phyllis sais, "Natural as the sag of your droopy boobs, woman!" Kathy looked her in the eye angrily and walked towards her and stopped at threee feet away and took off her shorts and panties with one motion and said, "Me too! No razor necessary, and my man loves it!" Phyllis replied, "So does mine, even though he wants more all the time." Kathy said, "Let me guess. He wants you to fuck other men so he can watch." Phyllis said, "Bingo. How about Jack?" Kathy said, "Yep, same perversion with him too. And Frankly, as horney as I am right now, I think he's about to grt his his wish!" Phyllis said, "I assume that's why they set this all up. Right Don, to get me fucked?! Jack, is that it?!" Jack and Don were now as uncomfortable as they'd ever been in their lives. After an excruciatingly long 30 seconds of silence, Kathy said, "Well, I for one am fed up with all the dishonesty. I say lets give these men of ours five minutes to get them out of their clothes and their dicks into the opposite wife's pussy, or the two of us women are going out bar hopping and find a couple of young stud to spend the night with." Phyllis added, Yep, five minutes, and if Jack isn't inside me and Don isn't fucking Kathy's bald cunt, we're outta here! Got it?!" Don and Jack wasted the first half minute staring ateach ither dumbfounded. But when their wives started getting ready to leave and Kathy set a kitchen timer for four minutes, they took charge and stripped naked. Soon Don had Kathy on the carpet. He had some difficulty inserting until she grabbed a bottle of lube, saying not as wet as I used to be. She squirted a generous amount of lube on both of them and he was soon inside her. Jack, onthe other hand, was all flustered and lost his erection from nervousness. Just then the timer rang and he looked like he was about to either faint or ry. However, Kathy said she's help and she pulled away from Don and helped Jack get hard by doing a tag team blow job on her husband. She also had Phyllis and her put thir tits in his face, saying his big fetish is saggy tits. That did the trick and as soon as he was hard she quickly guided him into Phyllis' pussy and then went back and impaled hersels on Don's cock. The gals forced their husband to fuck them three times that night, reminding them that the young studs they would have gone after would have done at least as good. After that night, the gals kept up their "punishment" for two whole weeks, refusing to have sex with their husband but bugging the other husband for it at least twice a day. After two weeks, they switched to nights of straight swapping and made sure to get a load crom each of them each night. Even if it wasn't a foursome, after sex with their husband, they would insist that one cock wasn't enough and would phone the other wife and say the were going to each other's house for a "topping off." That cotinued for two weeks until the husbands worried that the neighbors might notice. Kathy came up with a solution. They'd move out of the houses they'd been renting an move to a duplex at the edge of town she'd found and they'd have privacy. The duplex was in an apartment complex that had a pool. The gals increased sexual appetites (Kathy was now going to Phyllis' hypnotist) meant that they started really flaunting themselves, wearing tiny bikinis at the pool. When Jack caught his wife at home naked with a college kid, the men finally put their foot down and threatened to leave them. What the men found out was that their wives hated submissiveness and were waiting for them to show some backbone, which they did in spades. Two months later, after the men shared a winning lottery ticket, they moved to out west and shared a big house in a very liberal town. Phyllis and Kathy continued to dress in very skimpy attire, especially in light of the fact that their town was largely composed of ex-hippies. Neither of the wives even owned a bra by then. Then one day Kathy and Phyllis overheard their husbands talking abouy possibly swinging with another couple. The gals then brazenly took off their clothes andd walked nude out onto the patio and confronted them, saying, "Remember what they always say, be careful what you wish for, you might get more than you batgained for!"

romancerromancerabout 7 years agoAuthor
I win!

I may have just won the prize for the story with the longest remark by an anonymous commenter! I think I'm flattered!

jwfastbackjwfastbackalmost 7 years ago
Great story

For those of us who fantasise about maybe getting our wives to try something like this even once, this was a great well considered story. Thanks!

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 6 years ago
Been There Done That

Spent almost 10 yrs doing what you wrote about. Only a few actors, we never wanted to live a life style. Our thing was to try our fantasies, most were pretty good, some went bust. Even have a few videos of the hijinks. Years later, I still can't help but bring memories back.

agedmacagedmacabout 6 years ago

I agree Romancer, generally I don't like lots of chapters because after awhile it's about new positions, not new things. But, combining the really long anonymous post with the pay it forward, I have two options. First, she is going thru a slight menopause and finds herself very horny and she asks Don if she can go visit Eric for a month w/o him? There she lets down her hair and sleeps with Eric's new girlfriend too. or 2) she comes home crying one day and admits that she has had an affair with another man at work. Don makes her tell it all and finds it turns him on even more.

If interested in the latter, I have a story like that called The New Hot Wife.

Either way, you are a solid writer, both from the erotic nature of the stories you write as well as the believable 'inside the head' of the protagonist.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 4 years ago
Nice one

Great story, many a mans dream I,m sure, nicely written with good descriptions and characters without silly sex going on.

Freudzslip69Freudzslip69about 3 years ago

I loved it. A great story, really erotic, while being exceptionally nice all around. This is just what my wife and I would do. Everyone having a great time, and smiles all around at the end...and, great memories.

I agree with Agedmac about not liking lots of chapters where the sex is dragged out and re-warmed over and over again like yesterday's left over dinner. This seemed to be Just right as to the volume of and the quality of the sexual activity. I absolutely DO NOT LIKE his other two options though. For me, that ruins it.

Over all, well conceived, well plotted and well written. Congratulations and thanks very much.

Willysway1Willysway1almost 2 years ago

Awesome story. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Hoping for a continuation of this couple as it reminds me in a lot of ways, of my wife and me. Hoping I can one day get her to try this "Just One Time" experience.

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