to read more. 100 page goal? That's amazing, and I am very excited to see what you have. This story is great, witha nice setup, but I wish you'd post more than one page at a time! Great writing!
I appreciate the feedback. I have dedicated to writing well over 100 word pages of this story. I feel I need that many to completely develop the characters and situations I will put them in. I know this story was short, Chapters 3 and 4 are much longer, multi-page submissions as the characters grow their relationship. In hindsight, I should have released Chapters 1 and 2 as one chapter. This is my first story so I apologize for my lack of understanding. Please stay tuned though! Chapters 3 and 4 were submitted prior to the weekend and should be hitting very soon. They are longer. I am in final edit of chapter 5 which is the longest so far with chapter 6 well on its way. Thank you for the 30k views and I will do my best to deliver an incredible story over the long run!
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Can't Wait
to read more. 100 page goal? That's amazing, and I am very excited to see what you have. This story is great, witha nice setup, but I wish you'd post more than one page at a time! Great writing!
5/5
Keep Going
Waiting for next chapter. Thanks
Well done
I like this one so far. The prom thing was a nice device to get the sister's attention. Very good! Wanting more.
Thank You
I appreciate the feedback. I have dedicated to writing well over 100 word pages of this story. I feel I need that many to completely develop the characters and situations I will put them in. I know this story was short, Chapters 3 and 4 are much longer, multi-page submissions as the characters grow their relationship. In hindsight, I should have released Chapters 1 and 2 as one chapter. This is my first story so I apologize for my lack of understanding. Please stay tuned though! Chapters 3 and 4 were submitted prior to the weekend and should be hitting very soon. They are longer. I am in final edit of chapter 5 which is the longest so far with chapter 6 well on its way. Thank you for the 30k views and I will do my best to deliver an incredible story over the long run!
I want more!
I ca't wait for the next chapters!! HURRY!!
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