All Comments  for

Semper Fidelis Ch. 02

byWifeWatchman©
All
Comments (6)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/18/16

im tired

sure wish you would get to the hanging, looks like yu are draging it out to get Troy family killed.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/18/16

The intended victim was the SBI officer Crowbar got to flip who you said in the prior chapter would have been capped from behind with the Marine's own gun.

Jared got into the race so he could bring the FBI in to investigate Lewis and the SBI and clean out the corruption within its ranks, which if Lewis had won, would have been shutdown before much of the good work could have been done. And Stockman would have lost spectacularly.

Crowbar is so focused and hot on this one, because of the deaths of one other SBI agent who had led SBI Graves' team, before he was murdered and framed.

As to the tipster, my guess is that it was Conlan who is both clean and high ranking.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by 666iceman07/18/16

Answers to questions WW

1,Chief Griswold lives 3 doors away ie' 2467, 2465, 2463 and the Chief lives at 2461
2,Chief Griswold was the target and IC informed Governor Val Jared the Chiefs friend of that fact.
3,Chief Griswold is the one person alive who IC looks up to and respects friend wise as well as total faith in giving him the chance in this police force.
4,Harold Bennett, beacause of what happened to Tanya, the worm turns!
I will never make a detective, but I would have fun trying.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/19/16

Drag out

I expect that you will drag the story out till December with respect the to the consultant...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/11/16

They would never get away with their wHite Wash

That's a Fact SBI would be Eating there own crap Because NCIS would Be alll over this Case!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by tazz31709/24/16

THE LONGER AND DEEPER YOU SEEK

the more layers of filth have been deposited. TK U MLJ LV NV

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Semper Fidelis Ch. 02  or
More submissions by WifeWatchman.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel