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by Angiesteve69

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Editor

You really need to have someone edit your writing. There are a ton of usage and grammar errors which detracts from your impact.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very good story

Many "friends" have similar feelings but do not act. They regret not taking the chance. Good descriptions that capture the reality and loving feelings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Beautiful Story

Your storytelling and the emotions expressed are top rate. I couldn't give it 5 stars because of the lack of polish in the writing. This story could be a gem with just a little more editing. Please keep at it; you show the potential to be an excellent writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
AMAZING

I LOVE IT. DON'T STOP

Richie4110Richie4110over 7 years ago
Well Done

Very good story. Hope you keep writing and sharing

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26 year old Sri Lankan male. I'm writing stories as a hobby. Huge fan of incest romance stories. Specially woman being older. So, all of my stories would be about them. My submissions are quite slow because I have to balance this with my studies. Thanx for all the readers. Kee...