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Christine Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by live4thebj07/18/16

Very hot!

Very hot. If you have a part 2 please do her in the butt. *****

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by TSreader07/18/16

A very good start!

Can't wait for more! Thank you!

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by Anonymous07/18/16

Great story

Give Richard just the beginning of a dusting of chest hair -- it will add to mom's excitement!

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by horny2doit07/18/16

Yes, it's a loving gift Richard gave her and now she knows what she's missed all those years. Hopefully, they will really get into it and learn how they can find the best positions and technique to please each other. I think his Mom will really get into it more and more with more experience. Great start and cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

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by Anonymous07/19/16

Awesome

Keep going dude don't stop. Your mom story is hot. I am stroking it once again

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by cock4use07/19/16

Different but good

The mother is naïve and needs teaching... Very different from many mother/son incest stories. Loved it and can't wait for chapter two..

5/5

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by Anonymous07/19/16

hot

more please

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by Anonymous07/19/16

More please

Part two with more cum inside her pussy and get her pregnant, so hot to read about son fucking his sexy mother.

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by mschack6307/19/16

great start

Great start, please continue. Please don't ruin it by impregnating mom, that's a dead end. There are just so many other directions you can take this story.

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by boaman00707/19/16

great start

Love the start can't wait for the next installment.

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by Anonymous07/20/16

Re "..impregnating mom, that's a dead end. "

A son knocking up his mother is a "dead end" only for those who are imaginatively challenged.

Nothing better than the son watching his mom's breasts getting larger as they get engorged with milk and to see the baby bump growing with the knowledge that his seed was the cause of all that!

In this case there is no dad, but it gets even more spicy when the dad, the sister, the grand mother and the aunts have no idea that the son has placed a bun in his mother's oven.

It is a secret between the other and the son, at least to begin with.

Now that COULD lead to all kinds of possibilities of further chapters :)

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by Comentarista8207/23/16

Intriguing

Interesting description of Christine and while you provide some background on her (paralegal, husband abandoned her only after 4 experiences), her coupling with Richard seems rushed; in other words, you do present the conflict on both their parts, but they just admit how they feel and then barriers drop. Include more resistance to make it feel more plausible, as I could see them exploring each other's body one week, him getting her a vibrator after a few more (them talking about their newfound feelings during that time and barriers dropping little by little and he doesn't show her how to use it--she despite her naivety finds out), them moving on to light foreplay, etc...then maybe after 1-2 months they do the regular sex and then move to oral as they get more comfortable with the idea of their union--but there's some residual conflicting feelings as they go that slowly resolve and get accepted.

Like the idea, good premise, good ideas, but needs more time and details with fleshing out of situations similar to the above. Continue. 3.

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by Anonymous07/24/16

Uh...huh

"This is a story of mother and son incest and is sexually graphic in content"

YUP. GRAPHIC B.S MORE LIKE IT.
FAIL.

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by Anonymous07/27/16

PLAUSIBLE

The two should now move to a new location as man and wife, explore more sexual possibilities and have some babies

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