Finding Travis Ch. 11

what a shitty ending....totally disappointed.

Disappointed

I'm rather disappointed that the author of some of my favourite F/m stories about caring, loving and openminded couples has put out an entire series of degrading abuse porn.

Disapointed

I agree with the other comments. this was a terrible ending. You have the main character doing something he fought against for the entire story. A very lazy ending.

Too bad, that story went downhill very, very fast.

Huh?

The ending makes no sense to me. If he wanted to go to The Farm so bad why did he keep trying to escape? Why was he grateful to Katie for her buying his freedom?

Why didn't he just call Katie and let her know Rachel didn't want him anymore? Katie only stated he had to give him away because she thought Rachel wanted him, clearly Rachel didn't he could find someone else.

He claimed he wanted a say in who got him. Why would that suddenly change?

I don't mind a bad ending where he gets screwed over, but I want it to make sense.

Awesome story,could hardly wait for subsequent additions. Maybe the story of Travis and Jordy will continue as they get transported to the farm

This is the first story I read by you. It is quite a beautiful story and really delineates the difference between caring bdsm and just plain abuse. The ending, although breaking my heart slightly, shows that actually a persons desire to serve will make them consider any amount of degradation in order to fulfil that function. It's a harsh reality for many subs who seek out dominants that the frenzy will make them do anything to be a sub, forgoing common sense and safety for the thrill of being a sub. This story had me gripped totally all the way through :)