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by Anonymous07/22/16

One of your better stories. Enjoyed the read

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by Anonymous07/23/16

Good story but you changed from first person to third person half way through

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"Good thing I wasn't listening, then". Heeeeheehehe...cough...mind if I borrow that?
Okay, to quip that you probably sit up nights scraping the insides of your brain for sharp retorts to possible verbal attacks, is nothing short of corny...but do you? Either that, or you've got a room underground, kept flooded with murky water that reaches the thighs of people who's faces once graced the backs of milk-cartons, but are now chained to your wall, constituting a think-tank. Does one get better results when a single meal only is provided them instead of the usual, or is Chinese opera music a more desirous prompt? Silly me, you can't answer that.
Shot again for story.
"Is this any better". Teehee. Cough.
You MUST know you're doing me a favour.

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