All Comments on 'Mewls'

I simply like it. I'm not sure what else to say about it at the moment (I always have that problem when it comes to your poetry) :) I just know that it's a very good poem and I enjoyed reading it.

I like your word choices in this piece,

but I don't follow the connection from the first two stanzas to the last.

Hidden kingdoms.

cat-o nine tails and green algae

I can see/smell this very clearly

I always thought Fae lived around the pond I grew up near also.

very lyrical

Thank you

this is very lyrical...and refreshing...enjoyed reading...o)) bluerains

as always Razz, though I tend to agree with YDD that the lyricism of the first stanzas is somewhat diminished by the last--though the last two lines pull it all together nicely IMHO. :)