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Kubo
I’m slightly perplexed that you named her after a Japanese word that means “vagina”… ^^
Floaty
Would've liked to have seen more levitation in this series! Hopefully your next series has a bit in it! Loved this series. Can't wait for the next! Just don't dissappear like so many before you.
Sorry bro
But the ending was a huge pile of crap. I am not talking about believable characters this is Literotica after all. What I habe to say though is that the ending is to rushed and far too random. "Light Fairy of Lust" my ass!
You're right
I wrote the ending to this and didn't go over it as much as usual. Honestly I feel as though I had learned from criticism, both positive and negative, and wanted to move on to something fresh. I just submitted the first episode of my next series and I'm very excited and hopeful that I correctly took all the good and bad criticism as a proper teaching lesson to where this next series will carry out to a fully thought out climax. I am sorry that the ending seemed rushed, and I can't deny otherwise. I can just hope that you will enjoy my newest work when it is up for you to read.
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