All Comments on 'poem before concert'

Full of phrases and jumbled concepts.

I see your words and images,

but find them difficult to assemble into a whole.

maybe that is the point

not everything or everyone fits together

in a nice package

Thank God

and thank god that *someone* can capture this truth in a beautiful poem,

without just saying something simple and obvious like

"Not everything fits together into a nice package." and then rhyme what rhymes with package anyway

with meter and a pretty little couplet at the end....

I love you I miss you I thank you every day