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by Anonymous

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by YDD04/18/04

disConcerting poem

Full of phrases and jumbled concepts.
I see your words and images,
but find them difficult to assemble into a whole.

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by annaswirls04/18/04

YDD

maybe that is the point
not everything or everyone fits together
in a nice package
Thank God
and thank god that *someone* can capture this truth in a beautiful poem,

without just saying something simple and obvious like

"Not everything fits together into a nice package." and then rhyme what rhymes with package anyway

with meter and a pretty little couplet at the end....

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