Getting Lucky in Kentucky Ch. 04

Pardon my language but FUCK YEAH!

And not for the sex, which was sweet and alluring, but for the whole establishing of their relationship between them an in front of others. They were even as bold as to admit they are falling in love, even if ion throes of passion that is. But then came the cliffhanger that only made it more awesome, hopefully they'll go through it as they did about their relationship and be happy in the end.

5* and sitting on the edge of the seat for more!

Getting Good!

A real surprize! I started reading thinking I might not finish the first part but the twist from hate to caring about the feelings of the other person hooked me.

Agree, good development of the story with some nice twists and turns. The scenario at the table with the group is well done and very much like what would happen. Now the story gets serious, instant love, living with Mom and surprise, a DAUGHTER!!! Looks like the apartment is going to be a bit small for three.

I have those same albums!

I have those same albums! What a coincidence!

Great Cliffhanger!

Just when I started thinking it was getting all predictable and HEA-ish*, WHAM! Plot twist, mental whiplash, and now I'm hooked again. Good job. Well done.

*HEA - Happily Ever After

Chapter 5 . . .

. . . has just been submitted.

Chapter 5 has been approved . . .

. . . and is scheduled to appear on Thursday.

Well, this is going to be interesting!!

Well done. Really want to punch in a 5, but now determined to see what the whole thing looks like. Right now? Looking good.

Whoa!

Dayummm....I'm really loving this.