Great style, very erotic, well written and I loved the way the author painted a picture with her words. Loved that it focused on the mental and emotional aspect from the submissive's point of view and explained how and why it all turned her on. Fabulous first post and hopefully there will be more.
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I liked your story
I hope to,ready more of what you write
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Great style, very erotic, well written and I loved the way the author painted a picture with her words. Loved that it focused on the mental and emotional aspect from the submissive's point of view and explained how and why it all turned her on. Fabulous first post and hopefully there will be more.
Amazing First Story
Really loved it. So hot, and the alpha male stud wasn't overdone. I really hope u keep writing.
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