All Comments on 'Her Subcommander'

The title is fantastic! Also a very good poem. :)

An amusing play with words.

Well worth a read and then another.

Made me think of " Submission" by the Sex Pistols at first glance.

Great read and I agree you need to read it twice

Very clever writing

Thank you

This is a wonderful picture. I like the ship metaphor and the feelings it surfaces. Thanks!

Wonderful images and what a command of the language (of submission) you have. A very enjoyable read.

The last three lines do it for me, tightly phrased.

~Merry

It's easy to write when one has a muse. We are lucky.

Now here she sounds like a truly fun gal

The kind you'd love to take home to mother and...

Never mind.