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The title is fantastic! Also a very good poem. :)
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An amusing play with words.
Well worth a read and then another.
Great stuff
Made me think of " Submission" by the Sex Pistols at first glance.
Great read and I agree you need to read it twice
Very clever writing
Thank you
Yes!
This is a wonderful picture. I like the ship metaphor and the feelings it surfaces. Thanks!
wow
Wonderful images and what a command of the language (of submission) you have. A very enjoyable read.
Delightful
The last three lines do it for me, tightly phrased.
~Merry
lovely
It's easy to write when one has a muse. We are lucky.
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Now here she sounds like a truly fun gal
The kind you'd love to take home to mother and...
Never mind.
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