All Comments on 'The Letters'

I would not miss reading this one.

Another fantastic story. I so hope you continue writing. I'd suggest you look into publishing erotic fiction if you can do lengthier stories. I think you could make a fortune. And best of luck to you if you do!

Thanks

I enjoyed this story!

Much better handling of the multiple characters dialogue.

I'm scrutinizing these stories...WHERE is the hideaway cottage? :+)))

Maybe I’m just old fashioned, but usually whenever I see “incest” as a tag for a story, I’m out. But I have to admit, you are one of the few who is able to get around my “squick” reflex. You approach the subject with an innocent playfulness that gently puts any misgivings to rest. Wonderful story, a fun romp. Thanks for sharing it with us!

Wonderful story and the way the characters ( live and in the letters) were woven together and developed was extremely well done.

The letters were particularly well done. They progressed nicely and advanced the story slowly but surely. A bit of the "current" dialogue was not as smooth, but you did a great job of attributing quotes without standard attribution. Overall, a top-flight story.