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Semper Fidelis Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/20/16

5*

What else ?

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by GrandPaM07/20/16

Hmmm...

OK I have a - how should I say this? It's less than a quibble on a technical matter, but more than nothing... - a tingle over a possible technical quibble, perhaps? ...concerning your facial recognition software not turning up matches for that dirty lawyer dude.
As I understand it, those software algorithms "see through" all typical disguise techniques, even the ones good enough to fool our own mothers. So, if that Roland guy was a match, then the facial recognition software really should/would have gotten a hit, unless there is some real "extra-normal" disguise wizardry being employed.
...and my writer/storyline spidey senses are tingling over that point.

Other than that, 5*'s of course.

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by WifeWatchman07/20/16

Congratulations, and some comments

Congratulations to those that got it. IIRC, iceman666 was correct that Chief Griswold was the target.
As to the facial recognition software, it worked fine but could not make out a blurry picture, which isn't abnormal if it was asked to do too much.
And to those who want me to hurry up... we have a couple of fun stories and then the final trilogy of stories of the Consultant saga. Patience, my friends...

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by nthusiastic07/20/16

Torn Between...

Eagerness to see the Consultant get his well-deserved comeuppance and desire for him to continue to weasel his way out so the saga never ends. Glad it's not my decision to make. The usual 5*!

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by Anonymous07/20/16

Well.....

Super next chapter! I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next one. ...just, please, don't kill any more of the good guys, please.

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by Anonymous07/21/16

More

Always keeping us guessing and putting up so much information, it is easy to get distracted and think the story line is going one way and not the way WifeWatchman ends up going. Only one criticism from this particular pervert, not enough sex in this chapter, even though it was a well written story.

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by tazz31709/24/16

WHEN YOU STARE INTO AN ABYSS

the hole looks bottomless and the people surrounding it more-so, TK U MLJ LV NV

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