All Comments on 'Breathe'

Another letter from a sub to a master.

A first one for this poetess.

Hopefully she will read submissions by others

and learn to grow her talent as she writes more.

Many subs start out this way, as far as poetry goes. I'm sure your Master will be pleased. If your only desire is to please him by submitting this poem for all to see, for all to know your depths of submission, then you have accomplished that. If your desire is to write better poetry, then please visit the poetry board here at literotica. You will be welcomed with open arms, well, open threads or something. :)

tribute to a Master.

I'm sure your new path will give you mush more to write about.

I look forward to reading it

Thank you