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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very nice

more a story than a poem -- Why don't you develop it further?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Where is the passion or anger!!!!!!!

After "Something Unexpected" I was expecting more.....than just a confused young girl.....

Gay Kat.

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Hi my loves, I'm currently working on a few stories so here is the breakdown: Daddy's Little Switch: African-American romance with bdsm themes The Seven: Anila - Interracial, Sci-fi Futa :-) The Seven: Secret Spinoff #1: Futa on everyone :-) The Seven: Secret Spinoff #2: Lesb...