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by legerdemer07/20/16

Very touching

This is so gentle, so light. The contrast between the beginning and the end.
Just lovely, GP.
(And I assume 'remembers' is purposeful dialect, not a typo? Either way, it does not detract - just made me stop and think again about a weakened, tremulous voice.)

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by Ashesh907/21/16

Very poignant

& as Mer said touching : 5-ed .

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