I liked how you wrote the story. The only problem I see is the threat of falling in love with Keith. My late wife started seeing this man. ( with my permission of course.) and she fell in love and he started pushing her to move in with him. It took a long time to convince her to stay with me. Before she died she confessed the only reason she stayed was the kids. She still kept seeing him for the next couple of years but not as often. as I had started paying more attention and taking her out together.
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Anonymous08/22/16
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Well written. I could relate to the feelings both emotional and physical. I hope to see a sequel
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Anonymous12/12/16
Great story...more?
I keep coming back, hoping for more chapters!
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Anonymous12/26/16
Loved it
My story is much the same as yours. I got married a virgin and only had been with my husband. Over the next few years he began to push me to try another man. Eventually I did and it was great. My husband now helps me get ready for my dates and loves to hear all about them when I come home. It's perfect.
I really liked the story. It was short, but well written. It was more than just a stroke story and I certainly related to the geography, as well as the business context.
English
Mmmm.
I liked how you wrote the story. The only problem I see is the threat of falling in love with Keith. My late wife started seeing this man. ( with my permission of course.) and she fell in love and he started pushing her to move in with him. It took a long time to convince her to stay with me. Before she died she confessed the only reason she stayed was the kids. She still kept seeing him for the next couple of years but not as often. as I had started paying more attention and taking her out together.
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Well written. I could relate to the feelings both emotional and physical. I hope to see a sequel
Great story...more?
I keep coming back, hoping for more chapters!
Loved it
My story is much the same as yours. I got married a virgin and only had been with my husband. Over the next few years he began to push me to try another man. Eventually I did and it was great. My husband now helps me get ready for my dates and loves to hear all about them when I come home. It's perfect.
Hmmmmm
Technically well written but I agree with another commenter who said it lacked any emotional flavour.
Write about your real feelings and sensations, both emotional and physical during sex. The nitty gritty so to speak. That would improve it a lot 3*
5 Stars
I really liked the story. It was short, but well written. It was more than just a stroke story and I certainly related to the geography, as well as the business context.
Nothing like a romantic dinner...
...but at Red Lobster?
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