An excellent first story. My only criticism is that it is a bit rushed with a lot happening on one page, but I look forward to reading more by you.
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Anonymous07/22/16
Erotic, well-written
When a married couple agrees to allow extra-marital affairs, that is their choice. In this case, it made for a hot, well-written story. Congratulations, keep on writing. 5*.
The only thing, past erotica, that I look for in a story like this is, are all the participants treated appropriately, with respect? This was a loving story.
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Anonymous07/22/16
Ignore the mentally ill trolls.
Good first story. My one suggestion would be to try to explore what this does for your husband and how it's impacted your relationship, sexually and otherwise.
Re the negative comments, there is a small group of idiots who post those comments on every loving wives story on the site. They can't stop themselves from reading stories they hate the whole theme of. It's a mystery.
It could be a good story...it had potential...but...
It could be a good story...it had potential...but it arises issues never answered: 1st - She did it all always with her husband blessing...But the idea for the first time was for her to stop thinking what other cocks would feel...Not for her to enter a long affair with a married man...A long affair always develops strong feelings between the lovers, feelings that soon or later will damage the ones they feel about their spouses... 2nd - Did she really believed that the lover wasn't satisfied with his sexual life with his wife? Didn't she understood that was a bullshit talk for him to fuck her? 3rd - Where stays the lover's life and family when his wife finds out about this (soon or later she will) and divorce him? Then he will be a free man and will want his lover only to himself...Will happen a second divorce, all her true and strong love for her husband "gone with the wind"? 4th - Never was explained why her husband was so understanding about her having a lover, even in their house, even with the danger that one day one of the children could come home early and find the mother fucking a strange man? Was he also having some fun outside the marriage? So all this issues make this story and these characters difficult to accept and be believable...It would be a good story if she used her "wild card" once and then understand that there is nothing more strong than true love...But that didn't happened...and now the only way for these marriages is "downhill"...1*
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Anonymous07/22/16
re: anonymous-ignore the trolls
There is a small group of idiots like this anon who can't stand it when others have an opinion. Fucking hypocrite. Better have another look at yourself idiot, you have issues.
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Anonymous07/22/16
7 year itch
My wife ran into an old boyfriend 7 years into our marriage. She was a virgin when we married, something I knew for sure.
But I could tell the way she acted that she was curious, so I asked her flat out if she wanted to see if there was any difference.
So they dated, 3 times, finally the 3rd date she tried the guy out. She came home, told me he was a waste of time and she wasn't interested. He was so small he had to hold the condom on and it was over in a couple of minutes.
No real harm done, she learned and it was all forgotten.
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Anonymous07/22/16
Very nice story
This is how things happen in real life - at least it did with my wife and me. Having a lover outside a traditional marriage is not for everyone and does not work for everyone. It did for us. My wife's lover was a fellow conference member. She never told him that she told me.
I enjoyed the "true life confessional" tone of this story, but it left me feeling a bit empty. The narration was so cold and clinical, it lacked any emotional depth whatsoever. Brian was a little too nonchalant about the whole affair, Keith was portrayed the same, and even the narrator seemed devoid of conflict and emotion.
There were so many unnecessary details in this story (including heights, weights, and what they ate for dinner!), yet it seemed there wasn't enough detail included about the three main characters.
If/when you write the sequel regarding the trip to Vegas, please include a little more detail about the characters involved. Don't merely tell us what they look like; show us what type of people they are. Include some dialog to give your characters a voice. That way, we can connect to them as readers and care what happens to them as your story unfolds.
Thanks for contributing.
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Anonymous07/22/16
Great first story
I like the amount of details, it makes it seem much more realistic and believable. I even learned what a Starker exchange is; I'll call my accountant later today and see if I should be using it.
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Anonymous07/22/16
If this ends well ,i can not see this working ,end of marriage.
If the husband was cheating on her ,this would even the score. But to continue would have to end her marriage and what kind of husband would be okay with this arrangement. Poor chucky story from this suposily new author .
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Anonymous07/22/16
Open Marriage or Hot Wife
Hi Julie
2ndThoughts
Nice presentation, I easily felt myself slowly getting interested and in a comfortable way...thanks to your husband.
Seems that hubby is very comfortable with himself, appreciates you and recognizes the satisfaction that comes with fantasy and curiosity...obviously he is comfortable with your love of each other and his manhood!
You are the envy of many women who would like the security of a good and strong marriage and with the opportunity for some extra sensual and exhilarating extramarital sex...you are special!
My E-Mail is changed due to hacking but I miss your exchanges!
Good story...5.
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Anonymous07/22/16
hot
well written hot story.This is what loving wives are all about.thanks..
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Anonymous07/22/16
Sorry ma'am
It just draws too much on desire over real life. Once may have stretched a man's limits but been believeable... the continuing affair would end any marriage and surely destroy your kids... unless that is your desire, to ruin the lives of your kids. Daddy will have to eventually take a lover too and then the kids will see mommies and daddies are not faithful people... monkey see, monkey do.
I enjoyed the story immensely! You kept your husband in formed from the beginning and he loved it. I can certainly relate to that. Your story is detailed just enough to make it real. Actually I think it is real, which makes it so much hotter. Please write about about the rest of your fun times. Ignore the anonymous trolls, they're ridiculous.
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Anonymous07/22/16
Well told
Very erotic. I liked it. Hope you have more in store.
As I read the discussion between husband and wife prior to her date with Keith I got to wondering how the discussion might go after a very successful date. This instant story by JulieAnn42 points out that what was intended to be a once or twice date and sexing situation turned into a longer term "affair". Also made clear that is that only two of the three parties seem to know the complete scope of the affair between Julie and Keith, and one of the affair participants is partly on the outside. Does the fact that a one time event evolves into an ongoing relationship change, introduce, emotions into the relationship?
In my experience with women emotions do get involved. I want to read the story that includes the after the fact conversation(s) between husband and wife. How does Julie explain that she wants to develop a "loving" relationship with Keith? How does Brian react? How do husband and wife talk through the aftermath and define items of agreement, disagreement and limits?
Any story that can raise that sort of question can be termed successful. Very good job JulieAnn42.
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Anonymous07/22/16
Very well presented, but honestly, it left me sad.
What this, and all other similar fantasy stories I've read patently ignore, is the very real human behaviors that accompany intimacy and the weird and complex things that come out of a 'sharing' scenario.
In my own experience, some women can compartmentalize, but then the relationship never develops into anything more than a great fuck....eventually becoming more like a workout at the gym, than a sexually exciting time. Everyone moves on.
The other scenario is both far more satisfying and many times more destructive. The women that can't or won't compartmentalize engage in ever more intimate ways, falling in love, wanting long-term assurances...in short some version of a complete transference. That's where spouses get hurt and reactive. Lives ruined, homes wrecked and families destroyed.
Wow. Short term thrill with a bored departure or total mayhem and drama leading to dramatic changes in quality of life and lifestyle.
Hmmm. Let's think about this...which you'll you choose? Or is there a third possibility that could happen. Oh, yes, certainly the "don't fuck around" option is there, but what other ways do affairs and trysts play out? I guess it depends upon the social and economical and moral mindset of the participants and how "together they are on the big stuff and the little details. Anything left to chance will surely blow up in their faces at some point, so they'd best be having several long, serious talks....oh, right. Tit's just a bit of fun and fantasy, right? Oh, well. No wonder the divorce and murder rates are rising.
Great first story. Your writing style is clear and concise. I agree with some of the other commenters who suggest that you could even expand on some of the scenes and go into detail, but overall the story flowed very well.
Your story is a very thought provoking read. Like some of the other posters it left me thinking about the "what next?" Like any good story it had me yearning for more. I wanted to know about Brian's potential fear of if she will develop feelings, if the wife of Keith with find out, what happens if Keith and his wife divorce and Keith now wants to see her regularly or worse monogamously.
It is a great start to a story that could have many chapters. Brian's mindset of love and trust are uncommon and i think for some people they have a hard time coming to terms with that without some more explanation. They read about his unconditional trust and say, "that's not normal" and they want to know why that is.
Hope there is another chapter!
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Anonymous07/22/16
Off to a Great Start!
Great story. Believable and erotic. Happy ending.
Looking forward to the next submission.
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Anonymous07/22/16
Good Tale
I shared this with my wife, as we've been talking about this.
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Anonymous07/22/16
Scientific Fact
It finally occurred to me that married men's penises get shorter and thinner when their wives have an affair. The lover is always longer and thicker.
but well written. I wonder what the guy's wife will do even though her husband is okay with the situation. I also wonder if the husband is free to get some on the side? I like the fact that the wife is honest with the husband and seems to respect him. Over all a good story and I would read the sequel if one is presented. Thank you for sharing.
I'm sure that is a worry, Anonymous. But, as the old saying goes, it is the skill of the conductor that makes beautiful music, not the size of the baton.
Like others, I thought this was a well-constructed story. I note that JulieAnne has been a reader for several years before submitting her first story, and perhaps that has led to the somewhat clinical style which others have commented on?
On Literotica some years ago, there was a template for stories published. I can't recall the name but it is listed among my Favourite Stories. JulieAnne's story reminded me a little of that template.
I prefer stories that explore the character and motives of the people involved and maybe that could be done in any follow-up to this story?
But, once again, overall I thought it was a good story.
As a happily married man, I cannot foresee any circumstance in which I would willingly agree to my wife having an affair, the story does't really tell it from the husbands point of view, no emotion what so ever, no angst, jealousy, sadness or anything, very bland reporting of a slut wife.
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Anonymous07/22/16
What is Brian Thinking?
No way I would ever agree (or encourage) my wife to have an affair like this while sitting at home with the three kids! I can see the wife doing this one time for a thrill but, an ongoing affair will soon ruin both marriages.
I find it fascinating that people read a story, don't like direction the author is taking her story, and then predict all sorts of all sorts of endings based on their own beliefs about human behaviour.
Readers please, get used to the idea that the story belongs to the author, not to you. It will go where she wants it to go. If you don't like what she is doing with her story, stop reading it and write your own story. Become an author and write stories based on your own beliefs.
There is a big difference between a comment that says "I couldn't allow my wife to do that" and a comment that says "She did the wrong thing and now she will suffer for it." She won't suffer unless the author wants her to.
Lue
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Anonymous07/23/16
Luedon
You have diarrhea of the brain.God almighty who the fuck do you think you are? Listen If you like the story say so If not say so.But you continually bitch about what other peoples opinions are.Why? It's just their opinion? You are truly a loony .As for this story I thought there was nothing new here Has been done to death.The be careful what you wish for plot with a self centered wife and a cuckold husband How many times?
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Anonymous07/23/16
to luedon
what i find is a fool write garbage and an idiot comments on other people comments, remind you of anyone idiot.
I would let my wife do this if she wanted. I want her to be happy. If this made her happy, it would be O.K. with me.
The rating stars won't work; but, if they did, I would give you 5 stars.
Thanks for the story. I liked it.
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Anonymous07/23/16
Good first attempt
Don't fret the haters. It's a good first attempt. I like the premise. Can you develop it further? Go into the ongoing? Does she see other people? What's the husbands ongoing response? I like it so far.
Well, I must say. Two stupids make for a divirce or two in this case. Husband just became king of stupid. Sorry, but adultery is adultery no matter hiw one writes it.
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Anonymous07/23/16
Great scheme, weak emotion
I like the permission genre but there needs to be more complications and her husband needs to express his emotions, joy, jealousy etc. Needs some betrayal and much more participation from the husband. 4 stars, keep up the good work and chapter 2 would be appreciated.
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Anonymous07/24/16
Some one said this was a happy marriage.
Since when is adultery considered a means to be happy? 1*
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Anonymous07/24/16
Don't fret the haters?
I didn't know one was a hater since they don't consider adultery a means to make a wife happy. I would consider them giving an honest opinion, but then one can't reason with the willing cuckolds who roam this site.
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Anonymous07/24/16
Ignore the mentally ill trolls.
Consider yourself ignored. Ask yourself, who is the mentally ill here, the guy who foams at the mouth over adultery, or a guy who voices an opinion, pointing out the hazards of adultery. Trolls are the ones who can't or won't consider an opposing opinion. I think this reader who spouted off should consider himself the "troll".
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Anonymous07/24/16
re: swingerjoe-welcome to Lit
Have to agree with swingerjoe who made some very valid points about this tale.
I'm always puzzled by the readers who take adultery so lightly.
Strange that adultery is considered to make a good marriage by so many readers. They must have different marriages than mine or most of the people I know.
P.S Proud of you Joe, you didn't bash another reader today. Your progressing. lol (signed ML)
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Anonymous07/24/16
It can be a GOOD marriage
The story is Great, I have been married forever and I allow/encourage my wife to take a lover. She has had about 5 affairs over the last 20 years each lasting over a year one lasted 6 years. We are totally in love and her outside sex has nothing to do with our love. In fact while she is involved our sex life goes way up. Good story Julie keep us up to date
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Anonymous07/24/16
1*
cuck shit.
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Anonymous07/24/16
re: anonymous-it can be a good marriage
I really don't think you have a marriage, more like an arrangement to live together. You claim to be totally in love. I don't believe you. Only a sick warped mind would think adultery is good for a marriage. You're setting a great example for your children and the future generation. You get one "atta boy" for that. Not.
You say:
"I really don't think you have a marriage"
How would you know?
Whether or not it is common for somebody to do the things JulieAnne described in the story about her relationship, the possibility is there for some people to do it and suffer no bad consequences.
Aren't you and your friends doing the same thing that you claim the cucks are doing? You guys are attacking people who like this story, even if they say NOTHING about the haters. So my question to you, since I see that ridiculous comment from you more often than not, is this: How do you justify doing the same thing that you claim is being done to you?
Think on it. Or at least try to. That hamster up there in your head needs a good work out.
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Anonymous07/25/16
@lex1
Don't think I've ever seen you make an actual comment on a story. You make tons of comments on other peoples comments, usually something rude. You must be a really nasty person. Is your life reading comments on Literotica and finding the rudest thing you can say to the person that made an actual comment on the story? You're kind of pitiful, you know. Why not read a story and make a comment on the story instead of trying to pick fights with other people who comment. You and luedon are quite a pair.
Like this story very much, not sure it would carry on for as long as suggested, an affair like this generally peters out after a few couplings.
I have agreed to my wife having sex with another man/men this kind of thing happens without major problems between the couple.
This is a good first try. I hope you won’t worry about the non-constructive comments. While you haven’t written before this, I suspect you have read a lot of Lit. stories and are well aware of the drill.
I found the story interesting, yet somehow distant. You painted the word picture with the broad strokes, where the fine tipped brush was needed. By this I mean we would have loved to see more of the emotions of the three main characters. The best way I know to do this in a 1st person story is through dialogue; unfortunately that’s about the hardest thing for me and I suspect many other new writers. If you continue this line, and I hope you do, try using a lot more dialogue.
Let us see the inner workings of Keith’s brain; he has claimed no interest in divorce, and you introduced him as a horny husband who isn’t getting what he needs at home—but how does he really think. Notice how he moves right from a first time to setting up the next. Is he falling for her?
Can Brian really be so laidback about his wife? If so, there has to be a story behind his attitude. You could show us with dialogue or if you decided to go 3rd person, you could let us look inside each character’s head, but I've noticed some readers don't seem to follow 3rd person stories very well when the POV changes.
Finally, what is Julie thinking? She starts out just wondering what a new man would feel like, but now she knows and she is setting up more dates. Is she falling for Keith? It sure appears she is.
Anyway, I hope you’ll continue the story along whatever line you see fit. Good Luck!
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Anonymous07/29/16
Not bad
Enjoyed it and hope there is more. Would like to know how hubby is taking it and if she still wants her husband as much.
English
With Permission
An excellent first story. My only criticism is that it is a bit rushed with a lot happening on one page, but I look forward to reading more by you.
Erotic, well-written
When a married couple agrees to allow extra-marital affairs, that is their choice. In this case, it made for a hot, well-written story. Congratulations, keep on writing. 5*.
The only thing, past erotica, that I look for in a story like this is, are all the participants treated appropriately, with respect? This was a loving story.
Ignore the mentally ill trolls.
Good first story. My one suggestion would be to try to explore what this does for your husband and how it's impacted your relationship, sexually and otherwise.
Re the negative comments, there is a small group of idiots who post those comments on every loving wives story on the site. They can't stop themselves from reading stories they hate the whole theme of. It's a mystery.
It could be a good story...it had potential...but...
It could be a good story...it had potential...but it arises issues never answered: 1st - She did it all always with her husband blessing...But the idea for the first time was for her to stop thinking what other cocks would feel...Not for her to enter a long affair with a married man...A long affair always develops strong feelings between the lovers, feelings that soon or later will damage the ones they feel about their spouses... 2nd - Did she really believed that the lover wasn't satisfied with his sexual life with his wife? Didn't she understood that was a bullshit talk for him to fuck her? 3rd - Where stays the lover's life and family when his wife finds out about this (soon or later she will) and divorce him? Then he will be a free man and will want his lover only to himself...Will happen a second divorce, all her true and strong love for her husband "gone with the wind"? 4th - Never was explained why her husband was so understanding about her having a lover, even in their house, even with the danger that one day one of the children could come home early and find the mother fucking a strange man? Was he also having some fun outside the marriage? So all this issues make this story and these characters difficult to accept and be believable...It would be a good story if she used her "wild card" once and then understand that there is nothing more strong than true love...But that didn't happened...and now the only way for these marriages is "downhill"...1*
re: anonymous-ignore the trolls
There is a small group of idiots like this anon who can't stand it when others have an opinion. Fucking hypocrite. Better have another look at yourself idiot, you have issues.
7 year itch
My wife ran into an old boyfriend 7 years into our marriage. She was a virgin when we married, something I knew for sure.
But I could tell the way she acted that she was curious, so I asked her flat out if she wanted to see if there was any difference.
So they dated, 3 times, finally the 3rd date she tried the guy out. She came home, told me he was a waste of time and she wasn't interested. He was so small he had to hold the condom on and it was over in a couple of minutes.
No real harm done, she learned and it was all forgotten.
Very nice story
This is how things happen in real life - at least it did with my wife and me. Having a lover outside a traditional marriage is not for everyone and does not work for everyone. It did for us. My wife's lover was a fellow conference member. She never told him that she told me.
Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Welcome to Lit
I enjoyed the "true life confessional" tone of this story, but it left me feeling a bit empty. The narration was so cold and clinical, it lacked any emotional depth whatsoever. Brian was a little too nonchalant about the whole affair, Keith was portrayed the same, and even the narrator seemed devoid of conflict and emotion.
There were so many unnecessary details in this story (including heights, weights, and what they ate for dinner!), yet it seemed there wasn't enough detail included about the three main characters.
If/when you write the sequel regarding the trip to Vegas, please include a little more detail about the characters involved. Don't merely tell us what they look like; show us what type of people they are. Include some dialog to give your characters a voice. That way, we can connect to them as readers and care what happens to them as your story unfolds.
Thanks for contributing.
Great first story
I like the amount of details, it makes it seem much more realistic and believable. I even learned what a Starker exchange is; I'll call my accountant later today and see if I should be using it.
If this ends well ,i can not see this working ,end of marriage.
If the husband was cheating on her ,this would even the score. But to continue would have to end her marriage and what kind of husband would be okay with this arrangement. Poor chucky story from this suposily new author .
Open Marriage or Hot Wife
Hi Julie
2ndThoughts
Nice presentation, I easily felt myself slowly getting interested and in a comfortable way...thanks to your husband.
Seems that hubby is very comfortable with himself, appreciates you and recognizes the satisfaction that comes with fantasy and curiosity...obviously he is comfortable with your love of each other and his manhood!
You are the envy of many women who would like the security of a good and strong marriage and with the opportunity for some extra sensual and exhilarating extramarital sex...you are special!
My E-Mail is changed due to hacking but I miss your exchanges!
Good story...5.
hot
well written hot story.This is what loving wives are all about.thanks..
Sorry ma'am
It just draws too much on desire over real life. Once may have stretched a man's limits but been believeable... the continuing affair would end any marriage and surely destroy your kids... unless that is your desire, to ruin the lives of your kids. Daddy will have to eventually take a lover too and then the kids will see mommies and daddies are not faithful people... monkey see, monkey do.
Well told
But I think we need further chapters.
Does Brian get Keith's wife?
Does Keith's wife find out and tell Keith?
Do the kids find out and tell their dad?
Wonderful
I enjoyed the story immensely! You kept your husband in formed from the beginning and he loved it. I can certainly relate to that. Your story is detailed just enough to make it real. Actually I think it is real, which makes it so much hotter. Please write about about the rest of your fun times. Ignore the anonymous trolls, they're ridiculous.
Well told
Very erotic. I liked it. Hope you have more in store.
Thoughts on reading . . .
. . . this well done story.
As I read the discussion between husband and wife prior to her date with Keith I got to wondering how the discussion might go after a very successful date. This instant story by JulieAnn42 points out that what was intended to be a once or twice date and sexing situation turned into a longer term "affair". Also made clear that is that only two of the three parties seem to know the complete scope of the affair between Julie and Keith, and one of the affair participants is partly on the outside. Does the fact that a one time event evolves into an ongoing relationship change, introduce, emotions into the relationship?
In my experience with women emotions do get involved. I want to read the story that includes the after the fact conversation(s) between husband and wife. How does Julie explain that she wants to develop a "loving" relationship with Keith? How does Brian react? How do husband and wife talk through the aftermath and define items of agreement, disagreement and limits?
Any story that can raise that sort of question can be termed successful. Very good job JulieAnn42.
Very well presented, but honestly, it left me sad.
What this, and all other similar fantasy stories I've read patently ignore, is the very real human behaviors that accompany intimacy and the weird and complex things that come out of a 'sharing' scenario.
In my own experience, some women can compartmentalize, but then the relationship never develops into anything more than a great fuck....eventually becoming more like a workout at the gym, than a sexually exciting time. Everyone moves on.
The other scenario is both far more satisfying and many times more destructive. The women that can't or won't compartmentalize engage in ever more intimate ways, falling in love, wanting long-term assurances...in short some version of a complete transference. That's where spouses get hurt and reactive. Lives ruined, homes wrecked and families destroyed.
Wow. Short term thrill with a bored departure or total mayhem and drama leading to dramatic changes in quality of life and lifestyle.
Hmmm. Let's think about this...which you'll you choose? Or is there a third possibility that could happen. Oh, yes, certainly the "don't fuck around" option is there, but what other ways do affairs and trysts play out? I guess it depends upon the social and economical and moral mindset of the participants and how "together they are on the big stuff and the little details. Anything left to chance will surely blow up in their faces at some point, so they'd best be having several long, serious talks....oh, right. Tit's just a bit of fun and fantasy, right? Oh, well. No wonder the divorce and murder rates are rising.
I enjoyed it
Great first story. Your writing style is clear and concise. I agree with some of the other commenters who suggest that you could even expand on some of the scenes and go into detail, but overall the story flowed very well.
Your story is a very thought provoking read. Like some of the other posters it left me thinking about the "what next?" Like any good story it had me yearning for more. I wanted to know about Brian's potential fear of if she will develop feelings, if the wife of Keith with find out, what happens if Keith and his wife divorce and Keith now wants to see her regularly or worse monogamously.
It is a great start to a story that could have many chapters. Brian's mindset of love and trust are uncommon and i think for some people they have a hard time coming to terms with that without some more explanation. They read about his unconditional trust and say, "that's not normal" and they want to know why that is.
Hope there is another chapter!
Off to a Great Start!
Great story. Believable and erotic. Happy ending.
Looking forward to the next submission.
Good Tale
I shared this with my wife, as we've been talking about this.
Scientific Fact
It finally occurred to me that married men's penises get shorter and thinner when their wives have an affair. The lover is always longer and thicker.
I'm staying single.
A bit clinical
but well written. I wonder what the guy's wife will do even though her husband is okay with the situation. I also wonder if the husband is free to get some on the side? I like the fact that the wife is honest with the husband and seems to respect him. Over all a good story and I would read the sequel if one is presented. Thank you for sharing.
Re: Scientific Fact
I'm sure that is a worry, Anonymous. But, as the old saying goes, it is the skill of the conductor that makes beautiful music, not the size of the baton.
Like others, I thought this was a well-constructed story. I note that JulieAnne has been a reader for several years before submitting her first story, and perhaps that has led to the somewhat clinical style which others have commented on?
On Literotica some years ago, there was a template for stories published. I can't recall the name but it is listed among my Favourite Stories. JulieAnne's story reminded me a little of that template.
I prefer stories that explore the character and motives of the people involved and maybe that could be done in any follow-up to this story?
But, once again, overall I thought it was a good story.
Lue
Not Sure!
As a happily married man, I cannot foresee any circumstance in which I would willingly agree to my wife having an affair, the story does't really tell it from the husbands point of view, no emotion what so ever, no angst, jealousy, sadness or anything, very bland reporting of a slut wife.
What is Brian Thinking?
No way I would ever agree (or encourage) my wife to have an affair like this while sitting at home with the three kids! I can see the wife doing this one time for a thrill but, an ongoing affair will soon ruin both marriages.
Anonymice wanting their own story endings
I find it fascinating that people read a story, don't like direction the author is taking her story, and then predict all sorts of all sorts of endings based on their own beliefs about human behaviour.
Readers please, get used to the idea that the story belongs to the author, not to you. It will go where she wants it to go. If you don't like what she is doing with her story, stop reading it and write your own story. Become an author and write stories based on your own beliefs.
There is a big difference between a comment that says "I couldn't allow my wife to do that" and a comment that says "She did the wrong thing and now she will suffer for it." She won't suffer unless the author wants her to.
Lue
Luedon
You have diarrhea of the brain.God almighty who the fuck do you think you are? Listen If you like the story say so If not say so.But you continually bitch about what other peoples opinions are.Why? It's just their opinion? You are truly a loony .As for this story I thought there was nothing new here Has been done to death.The be careful what you wish for plot with a self centered wife and a cuckold husband How many times?
to luedon
what i find is a fool write garbage and an idiot comments on other people comments, remind you of anyone idiot.
Your husband is great
I love the freedom that I and my husband have. You present your story very nicely. Xoxoxo Annette
5 stars
I would let my wife do this if she wanted. I want her to be happy. If this made her happy, it would be O.K. with me.
The rating stars won't work; but, if they did, I would give you 5 stars.
Thanks for the story. I liked it.
Good first attempt
Don't fret the haters. It's a good first attempt. I like the premise. Can you develop it further? Go into the ongoing? Does she see other people? What's the husbands ongoing response? I like it so far.
excellent
Excellent story sounds like a very happy marriage
Divorce
Well, I must say. Two stupids make for a divirce or two in this case. Husband just became king of stupid. Sorry, but adultery is adultery no matter hiw one writes it.
Great scheme, weak emotion
I like the permission genre but there needs to be more complications and her husband needs to express his emotions, joy, jealousy etc. Needs some betrayal and much more participation from the husband. 4 stars, keep up the good work and chapter 2 would be appreciated.
Some one said this was a happy marriage.
Since when is adultery considered a means to be happy? 1*
Don't fret the haters?
I didn't know one was a hater since they don't consider adultery a means to make a wife happy. I would consider them giving an honest opinion, but then one can't reason with the willing cuckolds who roam this site.
Ignore the mentally ill trolls.
Consider yourself ignored. Ask yourself, who is the mentally ill here, the guy who foams at the mouth over adultery, or a guy who voices an opinion, pointing out the hazards of adultery. Trolls are the ones who can't or won't consider an opposing opinion. I think this reader who spouted off should consider himself the "troll".
re: swingerjoe-welcome to Lit
Have to agree with swingerjoe who made some very valid points about this tale.
I'm always puzzled by the readers who take adultery so lightly.
Strange that adultery is considered to make a good marriage by so many readers. They must have different marriages than mine or most of the people I know.
P.S Proud of you Joe, you didn't bash another reader today. Your progressing. lol (signed ML)
It can be a GOOD marriage
The story is Great, I have been married forever and I allow/encourage my wife to take a lover. She has had about 5 affairs over the last 20 years each lasting over a year one lasted 6 years. We are totally in love and her outside sex has nothing to do with our love. In fact while she is involved our sex life goes way up. Good story Julie keep us up to date
1*
cuck shit.
re: anonymous-it can be a good marriage
I really don't think you have a marriage, more like an arrangement to live together. You claim to be totally in love. I don't believe you. Only a sick warped mind would think adultery is good for a marriage. You're setting a great example for your children and the future generation. You get one "atta boy" for that. Not.
How would you know, Anonymous?
You say:
"I really don't think you have a marriage"
How would you know?
Whether or not it is common for somebody to do the things JulieAnne described in the story about her relationship, the possibility is there for some people to do it and suffer no bad consequences.
Lue
@ anonymous ignoring the trolls
Aren't you and your friends doing the same thing that you claim the cucks are doing? You guys are attacking people who like this story, even if they say NOTHING about the haters. So my question to you, since I see that ridiculous comment from you more often than not, is this: How do you justify doing the same thing that you claim is being done to you?
Think on it. Or at least try to. That hamster up there in your head needs a good work out.
@lex1
Don't think I've ever seen you make an actual comment on a story. You make tons of comments on other peoples comments, usually something rude. You must be a really nasty person. Is your life reading comments on Literotica and finding the rudest thing you can say to the person that made an actual comment on the story? You're kind of pitiful, you know. Why not read a story and make a comment on the story instead of trying to pick fights with other people who comment. You and luedon are quite a pair.
Excellent story!!!!
Congrats!
Good
No Humiliation , which personally I find distasteful
More power to their elbow.
Like this story very much, not sure it would carry on for as long as suggested, an affair like this generally peters out after a few couplings.
I have agreed to my wife having sex with another man/men this kind of thing happens without major problems between the couple.
5 STARS FOR A GOOD FIRST STORY!
This is a good first try. I hope you won’t worry about the non-constructive comments. While you haven’t written before this, I suspect you have read a lot of Lit. stories and are well aware of the drill.
I found the story interesting, yet somehow distant. You painted the word picture with the broad strokes, where the fine tipped brush was needed. By this I mean we would have loved to see more of the emotions of the three main characters. The best way I know to do this in a 1st person story is through dialogue; unfortunately that’s about the hardest thing for me and I suspect many other new writers. If you continue this line, and I hope you do, try using a lot more dialogue.
Let us see the inner workings of Keith’s brain; he has claimed no interest in divorce, and you introduced him as a horny husband who isn’t getting what he needs at home—but how does he really think. Notice how he moves right from a first time to setting up the next. Is he falling for her?
Can Brian really be so laidback about his wife? If so, there has to be a story behind his attitude. You could show us with dialogue or if you decided to go 3rd person, you could let us look inside each character’s head, but I've noticed some readers don't seem to follow 3rd person stories very well when the POV changes.
Finally, what is Julie thinking? She starts out just wondering what a new man would feel like, but now she knows and she is setting up more dates. Is she falling for Keith? It sure appears she is.
Anyway, I hope you’ll continue the story along whatever line you see fit. Good Luck!
Not bad
Enjoyed it and hope there is more. Would like to know how hubby is taking it and if she still wants her husband as much.
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