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Why change from 1st to 3rd person?
Hey, liked the situation set up in the first parts: teasing, cheating hot wives are always hot! Got a little good orgasm denial mixed in there too- the sisters let him cum entirely too much for my tastes, but that's cool.
Just wondering, I liked how the previous parts were in 1st person, that made his feelings (and thus what we felt) more visceral and immediate, but it seems like you switched to a 3rd person perspective for the last chapter, why?
Anyway, good work, 7/10, would recommend.
Whoops... thanks!
Yes, the third party thing was an accident. Sending in an edit right now. Out of curiosity, what would people like to see next? I have some ideas. Next up, I think one of the sisters is going to run the same in-the-closet scam on her husband, with Jack as the guy on the bed and the husband as the cuck (probably whichever one did NOT get blown by Jack in the first pass through).
NAH
You should let the two other husbands remain "in the dark" participants. I'd like to see that jack secretly continued sleeping with his sister in laws. she finds out, and uses tricks and her brother in laws to get revenge on them all.
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