All Comments on 'She used to be Innocent Ch. 01'

i hope there is more I hope hes nice to her and she tells him off at same time its been awhile since I read a non con story where the guy is sorry but do what a happy ever after for them as well please have more

I hope you will continue the story. Its very engaging, well written and has a hidden romance flavor to it.

It has definite potential and I look forward to reading the next chapter, but you could use a good editor to clean it up a bit. Try the volunteer editors for the site!

Need some more background on Lilly, but it was good. I was interested...I'm not really cool with the half rape thing unless one party is slightly coerced into wanting it and in the end don't regret it which she did...so not my forte, but other than that pretty good.

same repetitive content

he broke her hymen with his fingures the biggest turnoff

am sure by the next chapter there would be equally not so sexy anal rutting and next he would share her with his friends completing her conditioning training grooming oh yeah you are going to add nipple or clit clamps ,some spanking ,whipping,some humiliation for breaking her

she would be transformed from naive virgin to alley whore by our glorified noncon prince

aint i right?

ok...