Behind My Love

What part about ROMANCE do you 'writers' not understand, sex with them saying I love you does not make it romantic. If I wanted to read what I just read I'd go to EROTIC COUPLINGS. 2*

Very romantic

I thought this story was very romantic- love in ordinary situations can be magical. Thanks for sharing!

Second Anon

Perhaps you should open your mind up a little bit. What I wrote there is most certainly a love story. It is a snapshot of the love two people have for each other reflected in their lovemaking. Trashing a story because you think it should be in a different category is just silly.

This story

I loved it. Just perfect. :)

Keep writing

You clearly have a gift of writing exactly the kind of realistic love making a woman needs. Please keep writing more.

Erotic couplings?

What was wrong with this story? I feel exactly the same with my wife I guess this is just true and very nice too. Literotica doesn't have to mean that everything must be blind lust. Love is very powerful too. I thought this was great well done.

This is a lovely story of how to make love.

There was no lust, no uncontrollable passion, no unstoppable desire. Everything was done with a deep feeling of love and a desire to show a tender feeling of love. The act of sex was but the sealing of a deeper feeling which words could not adequately express. Tenderness accompanied every act in this beautiful story of a love between two people.
Reading it took me back some 80 years; when first my new wife and I were able to raise the curtain on such a beautifully written first act.