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The Xerces Club Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/23/16

Stunning

Wow, what an amazing journey in such a short time. Is the author vicariously experiencing the same excitement as her heroin?

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by Andrewmsailing07/23/16

Moving along nicely.

Thank you. I'm greatly enjoying this. Clare's account of both her actions and, more importantly, her feelings is exciting. The pace is just right. I, like Clare, am left in a state of aroused anticipation. I eagerly await further disclosures. I wouldn't mind if each episode were slightly longer but you have avoided repetition, so well done there too. Please keep going.

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by hotmom_195407/23/16

Job

How do I get a job at the club, I would love to have worked there when I was Clara's age. I'd enjoy it today too. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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by Anonymous07/26/16

Perfectly arousing

I am thoroughly enjoying your series. It speaks to my secret exhibitionist. I am looking forward to finding out what happens next in further installments. Keep up the excellent work!

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by 10towers07/30/16

It gets more exciting each chapter

It has been a while since chapter 04 was posted, and I couldn't remember the title or author's name. After a few Google searches I finally found you story again. Hopefully Ch. 05 will follow soon. Your writing is top notch.

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by timm1082711/26/16

This is the most erotic story I've read to date. Very well written. I waited until I'd read all the chapters before rating & commenting. Superior work. I can't wait to see how Ch. 5 & more develop. Shame there is no 6th star.

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