by Creekman
this one has not got boring and has new twists and turns. Looking forward to the next chapter.
We Canadians don't commonly use terms like bloke, bloody hell and a few others. They are more likely to be British or Austrailian or a few other countries. Maybe the characters are expats. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Was a great story, kind of getting a little wham bam without much to it.
This is easily the best chapter yet in this exciting story, with wonderful characters and a plot that moves at a steady pace, fully engaging the reader at all times. In spite of some grammatical errors, this chapter still deserves a five stars rating for its overall excellence.