My First Piss

I love it ,and.just hope it could be longer

Want more

Would love to read what happened next. Well written, and well developed.

great

go on

Excellent

Oh boy, this is your first story? Really?
It was so hot. it got me off.
Excellently written with a great plot, pace and character development.
Please write and share some more with us.
CMH

Very hot

I adore reading about men cleaning women after they piss. Love how he went for it. Very hot!

Loved this.

Awesome job. Every part of this was a turn-on, from the inexperience of it to the boldness of it. Would love to read what happens next; hopefully she will let him piss for her.

Very nice

Mmmmm 'my first piss & my first kiss'
Very nicely written,
Gave me a nice hard on as I lost myself in the story ;-)
Would love to read more about their first sexual experuebce involing pee ;-)))

Waiting....

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Hey, you're a good writer, and that was hot!! Hope to see more from you here. :)