All Comments on 'Chance Meeting'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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Good start to what seems like a wonderful adventure. Well written. Please continue.

PrfsrPrfsrover 7 years ago
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You need to have someone proofread your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great start

What a wonderful read, I do hope part two will be out soon

danny333danny333over 7 years ago

Seems most all my favorite authors are women. I like it when stories are kept to a page or two at a time, and look forward to part two of this one. Great first story, but do pay attention to spelling/grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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Can not wait for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great start, but ....

needs continuation. Feels like I'm just left hanging at the end. And it may just be my imagination, but I can't help but feel Hektor has more to contribute to Sarah's weekend. Or will Michael monopolize her?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
It's Cheshire Cat!

Good story slightly marred by lack of proofreading. Not sure where Alfonso is going to feature in future?

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