hehe .....yep I believe every word you wrote in that thar story as the gospel truth.!**
gave you a "5" cause i liked it and kinda off the wall kinda kink and all.! yep.*
hope that ole man don't go to jail over what he done as it was all in fun.*
i will watch the news this week and see.
A very enjoyable read. I gave you a 5 and hope to see more of his adventures, or those of Ruby and Pearl.
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Anonymous07/26/16
more please
a second rendezvous with Pearl will be exciting!
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Anonymous10/30/16
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had to stop reading after the first piece of dialogue. i couldn't suspend my disbelief that far, i mean seriously, what a cringy attempt at writing a conversation
English
Silly
But so much fun!
hehe ..
hehe .....yep I believe every word you wrote in that thar story as the gospel truth.!**
gave you a "5" cause i liked it and kinda off the wall kinda kink and all.! yep.*
hope that ole man don't go to jail over what he done as it was all in fun.*
i will watch the news this week and see.
Thank you.
A very enjoyable read. I gave you a 5 and hope to see more of his adventures, or those of Ruby and Pearl.
more please
a second rendezvous with Pearl will be exciting!
...
had to stop reading after the first piece of dialogue. i couldn't suspend my disbelief that far, i mean seriously, what a cringy attempt at writing a conversation
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