All Comments on 'A Chance Encounter Ch. 01'

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Animefan2929Animefan2929over 7 years ago
Liked it

I like it. Keep going. Make it so he get turned into. A wereW and he's a super badass alpha. We need a good were story.

cowgirlcutiecowgirlcutieover 7 years ago
More

Please I'm begging for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Needs more character development

We don't get much sense of who Eric is. So it's hard to get really involved, wondering what will happen to him, since we don't know enough about him to care very much.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 7 years ago
How

How did he know it was a werewolf? Are they common in this world? He seemed to immediately know whatva furty 9 foot creature was!

GoldFinger578GoldFinger578over 6 years ago
Different

Missing a little information. Would be nice to have more of a build up to know what was going on and what happened to get to this point. Would have loved to known more about Eric and his family. Okay start so far. Hope if gets better. Don't take this harshly but it needs some work.

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