All Comments on 'Emotionless Pt. 05'

by Sarabi9

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
pretty good serious

not to bad, can't wait for the next part

LcnmdLcnmdover 7 years ago
A really good addition!

To me this chapter fits right in with the story so far. You probably won't get to many bonus points from people who want sex in every chapter though! Looking forward to more of this!

Thank you,

L

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I really like this series. Can't wait for the next installment. 5 stars.

MunchnMunchnover 7 years ago
great read

Please hurry it up with the next chapter. I'm really enjoying his story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice. keep writing!

Thanks for another installment of this series. I hope you continue this story and post more chapters. Lauren has really stolen my heart in a way and I hope to hear more from her very soon. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Next chapter

Please, whens ur next chapter coming.....??

I need to know what happens to Lauren.. will she let others into her life

pinkroguepinkrogueover 7 years ago
Love this story.

I like the depth you give of the characters. Love to read more

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Very good

I liked this series of stories, I hope you plan on extending it.

lovercat2942lovercat2942about 7 years ago
Personal growth

Lauren is coming right along, Still some small lessons to learn. Leaving Harper in the lurch without calling her, for example. One thing I'd love to see her stop is this defensiveness, not saying so-and-so for fear of such-and-such, I hope she eventually tells Jessie about her feelings of betrayal and anger that started the awful incident. I think Jessie will be quite willing to listen and help Lauren here. Anyway, this story is progressing quite realistically with growth for both Jessie and Lauren. Love the identification between the two. Great stuff.

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