by Sarabi9
To me this chapter fits right in with the story so far. You probably won't get to many bonus points from people who want sex in every chapter though! Looking forward to more of this!
Thank you,
L
Please hurry it up with the next chapter. I'm really enjoying his story
Thanks for another installment of this series. I hope you continue this story and post more chapters. Lauren has really stolen my heart in a way and I hope to hear more from her very soon. ;)
Please, whens ur next chapter coming.....??
I need to know what happens to Lauren.. will she let others into her life
I like the depth you give of the characters. Love to read more
I liked this series of stories, I hope you plan on extending it.
Lauren is coming right along, Still some small lessons to learn. Leaving Harper in the lurch without calling her, for example. One thing I'd love to see her stop is this defensiveness, not saying so-and-so for fear of such-and-such, I hope she eventually tells Jessie about her feelings of betrayal and anger that started the awful incident. I think Jessie will be quite willing to listen and help Lauren here. Anyway, this story is progressing quite realistically with growth for both Jessie and Lauren. Love the identification between the two. Great stuff.