All Comments on 'The Merry Widow'

Best story I've read in awhile. Very well described, very hot. Hoping there are more chapters coming.

gives all of us wrinklies hope !!!

my greatest wish is that my next two years are as good as this night!!

keep writing

and we will keep wishing

loved the story, hey old people need loving too, my dad had sex up until he died at age 89, i hope i can last that long too,lol.

5 is not high enough for this story. It is off the charts...

You have spun a sexy tale and appear to have spent the time to polish the technical aspects of the prose. I enjoy reading a good story that belies the sterotypes of the senior citizens without sugar-coating the realities of aging. You have written such a story.

If I may criticize one small detail it is your use of the euphemism "tool" to describe John's cock. The use of "tool" a few times would be fine and useful but I felt that you over used it. It seemed to conflict with the humanity of Meg and John that you presented in the story.

Thank you for writing this story.

Beautiful story of mature lovers. Many people spend their lives alone after their spouses pass on.

Can't criticize this story at all, except to say that it wasn't me.

… yet for me as Im in the same elderly age bracket with the same dreams and desires of these two. Your 'technique' descriptions are educational and I enjoy reading the reminders of how to make love in ones sunset years. Thanks for the story..."5"+++

Great story please do more.

Hope I can do this at 70!