Probably the best chapter int he series to date, I actually had all sorts of ideas going on until you revealed it's about the wisdom tooth. The consequent dialogues and situations were the best you wrote and I was actually on the edge of my set when she repeated her "Will you marry me?" question in front of the parents. Keeping my fingers crossed for the next part!
5* for this one!
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Anonymous07/26/16
I think chapter six is well over due, prequels just delay the story.
Yeah, Ch. 6 has taken longer than I thought it would. I have the basic part of the story there, but I just keep writing the same crap addition/ending to it.
I might just leave the ending out and come up with something else. But in the meantime I have some ideas for backstory since the original story was a bit light on that sort of thing.
I think it adds a fair bit of depth to the story, but I am looking forward to writing more sequel chapters.
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Anonymous07/27/16
Ended to soon
A good start but it ended a little strange. If I were a teenage boy I sure would have at least tried to get her naked again, maybe a BJ even.
Yes, I think Ashley wants her cousin, sexually she'd screw him blind because of what her ex-idiot boyfriend said to her. Her cousin who must have a good sized cock; would under different circumstances most likely do her very well. Yes, the next chapter should be where this whole plot goes forward in many ways. If the Mom and Dad leave for a day or two alone; I am sure the cousins will sort it out on their own. Thanks !
I thought of Nitrous oxide from when I first visited the dentist when I was much younger. He used it on me and it numbed the pain rather than completely making it go away.
A quick Google search just now tells me that yes, it is still used in some cases, but more often than not dentists seem to reach for more potent anesthetics. Fair enough I suppose, which is why I haven't ever been back to that dentist.
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Anonymous11/30/16
states cousins can marry
actually there are several states that allow first cousins to marry. California, Colorado, New Mexico, Texas, Alaska, Vermont, Massachusetts, Road island, New York, New Jersey, Maryland, Virginia, Tennessee, North Carolina, South Carolina, Alabama, Georgia, and Florida all allow first cousins to marry. with 9 others allowing it with caveats(what ever that means) and 5 more recognizing those marriages.
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This was fun
Probably the best chapter int he series to date, I actually had all sorts of ideas going on until you revealed it's about the wisdom tooth. The consequent dialogues and situations were the best you wrote and I was actually on the edge of my set when she repeated her "Will you marry me?" question in front of the parents. Keeping my fingers crossed for the next part!
5* for this one!
I think chapter six is well over due, prequels just delay the story.
You and me both, Anon.
Yeah, Ch. 6 has taken longer than I thought it would. I have the basic part of the story there, but I just keep writing the same crap addition/ending to it.
I might just leave the ending out and come up with something else. But in the meantime I have some ideas for backstory since the original story was a bit light on that sort of thing.
I think it adds a fair bit of depth to the story, but I am looking forward to writing more sequel chapters.
Ended to soon
A good start but it ended a little strange. If I were a teenage boy I sure would have at least tried to get her naked again, maybe a BJ even.
Yes, I think Ashley wants her cousin, sexually she'd screw him blind because of what her ex-idiot boyfriend said to her. Her cousin who must have a good sized cock; would under different circumstances most likely do her very well. Yes, the next chapter should be where this whole plot goes forward in many ways. If the Mom and Dad leave for a day or two alone; I am sure the cousins will sort it out on their own. Thanks !
Nitrous oxide?
Laughing gas? Do they still use this in the USA?
@Nitrous oxide Anon
I thought of Nitrous oxide from when I first visited the dentist when I was much younger. He used it on me and it numbed the pain rather than completely making it go away.
A quick Google search just now tells me that yes, it is still used in some cases, but more often than not dentists seem to reach for more potent anesthetics. Fair enough I suppose, which is why I haven't ever been back to that dentist.
states cousins can marry
actually there are several states that allow first cousins to marry. California, Colorado, New Mexico, Texas, Alaska, Vermont, Massachusetts, Road island, New York, New Jersey, Maryland, Virginia, Tennessee, North Carolina, South Carolina, Alabama, Georgia, and Florida all allow first cousins to marry. with 9 others allowing it with caveats(what ever that means) and 5 more recognizing those marriages.
Nice follow-up
Looking forward to more
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