by DeviantWriter
And you think they can differentiate between safe and dangerous? What if they think it's dangerous to be sexual? What if they think you're dangerous, will they stop? Fuck that. They won't know. You can order them to kill each other and they'll be fine with it because they can't think for themselves.
The problem with this is the law of unintended consequences.
I am glad that you read the comments on the first installment and referred to them at the start of Chapter 2. I feel this story has great promise. Down the road I can see Natalie and Sasha eagerly recruiting new conquests for their brother. Their parents will of course support it 100%. Pool Party! (I hope they have a pool!).
I wasn't expecting much when I started Reading since you admitted it was your first story here but I must, this has been hotter than expected. Well, done. Awaiting more.
If this is how you write smut as a beginner I can't wait to see how you write it when you have more experience! Remarkably hot! Please post the next chapter soon!
Sister's Friend's Neighbor's that are Friend's of his Mom. as Well as visiting Family from Mom and Dads side's of the Family. Not to Mention Women from School. Hot Teacher's and Bully's Girl Friend's . He could cuckold the Bully's . And get theer Girl's Pregnant and have them Marry and Raise his kids.
I hope you have not given up on this series, first two have been terrific!
It's a shame you've (I'm assuming) decided to not continue this story. While the writing could be improved, this chapter was still very enjoyable.