All Comments on 'seeker's paradigm'

A typical Liarical poem.

short lines,

similar sounds,

scattered rhymes.

I would have liked to have seen a rhyme in each of the longer stanzas,

and I think that in the line "four feet walks steadier",

"walks" should be "walk".

I guess it was in the phrasing, but it didn't have the gentle flow between lines so many of your other works have. I liked the rhyme here, but it didn't overcome the choppiness.

jim : )