All Comments on 'She used to be Innocent Ch. 02'

Great story!

Please keep on writing!

please update soon love this story even if this is non con I hope they have happy ever after and she keeps fighting intill he apologizes and does truly feel bad hope that made sense cause you don't see to many dom men say sorry

I thank you for the feedback. Sorry if I didn't make my story clear, I wasn't trying to make her seem like she was bought by a dress. I actually view Lilly as a very strong-willed individual, but I guess ending the chapter here was a bad choice as an author. I'm still new to this whole writing thing, this is actually my first story ever, so I'm still learning ways to describe my characters. My goal was to bring to light her girly personality, not make it seem like the dress won her over. I encourage you to read the third chapter where she executes her escape. It's taking a while to process but I sent it in for approval about one hour after I sent in this chapter. I was notified that it should be out by tomorrow.

Again I thank you for your feedback.

This is not an easy category to write in, you will always have anon posters who criticize without offering any productive feedback. Ignore them and keep writing, you'll learn more as you go along. I am guessing this is your first attempt, if so you are doing quite well so far!

its quite sad that she being so beautiful and innoceceny now defiled no one will marry her she will be a mere sexslave or maid for her entire life instead of being a beloved wife for a man who cares for her dignity and safety more than this scumbag who see her just as a lowly maid to be toyed and humiliated

i really wish someone better man come for her and marry her and kill this bastard

I prefer it when the girl doesn't like sex and has no experience.