- BDSM
- Careful What You Wish For
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All Comments on 'Careful What You Wish For'
by Switch90
- 12 Comments
ham_sandwichover 7 years agoGreat first submission, welcome to the author's club! It could have been a bit longer, but then again, that's what teasing is like sometimes. Like Shane, anxiously awaiting more...
FASfanover 7 years agoWelcome, new author, and please bring us Chapter 2 soon. Very well done -- five stars!
Anonymousover 7 years agoMaybe it's just me, but the whole strangling thing caught me off guard. To be honest, if I wrote it, it would've gone from erotic to snuff-film script with that little bit
Anonymousover 7 years agoStrong start. You've made the case they are BOTH into this. Looking forward to more and wondering where you plan to take it. I am strongly hoping it remains only between them - no cucking or crazy girlfriends. Also, teasing and denial gone too far looses interest for everyone. We all, including hubby, occasionally need to find the cheese in the maze or we give up. I have never bought into the 'never have a proper orgasm again' school of femdom. Train the desire out of him and you've got a broken toy. Broken toys aren't fun. Take good care of the toys that give you pleasure. Just saying.
Anonymousover 7 years agoAppreciate the input. I'm posting the rest of the story now. For the support, thanks. As for the cucking or crazy girlfriend part, cuckolding might be involved later down the line. But more as a fantasy role play. Shane could never actually share his wife. 😉
To the critics. Sorry I write like a ten year old I guess? You go read some Shakespearen porn while your wife gets off on my story. 😎
Anonymousover 7 years agokkkk best answer. I liked the beginning of the saga. I hope to see much tease and denial. good job.
Anonymousover 7 years agoIf you don't like it write your own stories.
Check your spelling, check your Grammer.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoShane jacked off all month. No way for his bitch to tell. And after this welcome home behavior she'll be going awhile longer without sex because he's going to divorce her and find someone that might actually love and respect him. What a cunt. This was bad even for fiction.
