Although the man making her both content and late meeting her mother in law both parties are satisfied. It is fairly descriptive and erotic, and I did go back over your previous works and could find no reason for your disclaimer before the story. However, putting it on certainly doesn't hurt and there can be no misunderstanding. I like your writing and look forward to more.
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Anonymous11/10/16
Author, Another good one as a continuation! One thing though, the scooter would go on to the ground in the cemetery, not the floor. Otherwise, just perfect! Thanks again, jntiques
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Fairly Descriptive and Erotic
Although the man making her both content and late meeting her mother in law both parties are satisfied. It is fairly descriptive and erotic, and I did go back over your previous works and could find no reason for your disclaimer before the story. However, putting it on certainly doesn't hurt and there can be no misunderstanding. I like your writing and look forward to more.
Author, Another good one as a continuation! One thing though, the scooter would go on to the ground in the cemetery, not the floor. Otherwise, just perfect! Thanks again, jntiques
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