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fabulous & exciting
Please Please continue with this story.
No sooner started reading and it ended, hope the next is much longer
I will try my best
Next time I will try to write a longer chapter but this was a nice breaking point. Will she die? Will she turn into a vampire?
Just a suggestion
An editor, quickly. You misspell words, don't utilize commas (so you have lots of run-on sentences and your use of some words are incorrect (Example: she heard a hustle). A good word to use would have been, rustling. You have a fabulous imagination and your story is really good. Keep it up!
Im so upset
I tried to give it four stars and mistakenly hit the one I'm sorry
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