All Comments on 'Minds Eyes, is it the Voice?'

This poem requires several readings for comprehensive understanding

because the writer enjoys his task of word stringing.

The poet has a style of putting words together that creates new phrases

and fresh views of old things.

However, at times the words can get in the way of clarity,

and the locution seems to become more important than the poem.

Don't skim RazzRajen's works, you will miss too much.

By the way, are you using "carcerate " as the negative of "incarcerate",

an overwhelm/whelm kind of thing? I can't find the word anywhere.