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by SweetOblivion

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 7 years ago

Very dramatic, S.O. Remarkable opening and closing; in between, a very imaginative narrattive.

".....when she's shot/Him.." is very skillful enjambment and heightens the drama even moreso.

I must admit I'm confused as to why it's listed as an erotic poem.

I'm recommending it in PF&D.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 7 years agoAuthor
thank you

I thought the context possibly erotic rather than the verse itself - the picture from a Russian friend that led to this verse was truly inspirational - I hope I have captured its effect here. I fear the end in the picture as not quite as I would have hoped in my revision of the tale - she looked so vulnerable - sad smile.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...